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Array ( [sid] => 67025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Doll [time] => 2004-10-11 19:44:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wrapped in plastic,
you open me up.
Distinguished features.
So cleverly defined.
Poised perfectly in
your hands.
Here I am.

You think you can dress me,
polish me up.
Mold me in your hands.
Steer my attitude
to blossom at your feet.
You watch me walk
and tell me how to talk.

I stay closed up
in this cardboard box.
Hoping you will decease.
Stop looking at me.
I'm not yours to bottle up.
You can't play with me
anymore. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Sirena_Degana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Doll

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:44:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wrapped in plastic,
you open me up.
Distinguished features.
So cleverly defined.
Poised perfectly in
your hands.
Here I am.

You think you can dress me,
polish me up.
Mold me in your hands.
Steer my attitude
to blossom at your feet.
You watch me walk
and tell me how to talk.

I stay closed up
in this cardboard box.
Hoping you will decease.
Stop looking at me.
I'm not yours to bottle up.
You can't play with me
anymore.

Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2004-10-11 19:44:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:43:18 PM AEST
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good write. very interesting.

Re: The Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:13:02 PM AEST
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nice poem. I have on ? do u think im insane?
well g2g bye

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Re: The Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by fayeelizibeth on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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i like the little rhyme at the end of the secound stanza, it kinda surprices you because there is no other rhyming anywhere, just there, it moves you along. also, the imagry is quite nice and strong, and a feeling many people have experienced, to have someone trying to mold them into something they aren't, but i hope it does not make you fearful of leaving your 'cardboard box'. thank you.

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