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speaking
i'm sitting in the crowd
with 100 people
but soon
they all
disappear
only I am left
the man is talking
to me
God, who is he?
I tune out
but then
something
draws me back
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
did you say
he loves me
did you say
he cares for me
no
wait
stop
I can't
let him in
no one
must see my
secrets
the man is still talking
to me
he says that God
will forgive me
he says that God
loves me
mabye I should
try this and
see
where it leads
suddenly
i'm
sitting in the crowd again
with 100 people
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
a father
a savior
a friend
I guess, now I know [comments] => 6 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 11 [informant] => devil_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

God, who is he?

Contributed by devil_child on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

The man is
speaking
i'm sitting in the crowd
with 100 people
but soon
they all
disappear
only I am left
the man is talking
to me
God, who is he?
I tune out
but then
something
draws me back
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
did you say
he loves me
did you say
he cares for me
no
wait
stop
I can't
let him in
no one
must see my
secrets
the man is still talking
to me
he says that God
will forgive me
he says that God
loves me
mabye I should
try this and
see
where it leads
suddenly
i'm
sitting in the crowd again
with 100 people
the man is still talking
to me
God, who is he?
a father
a savior
a friend
I guess, now I know

Copyright © devil_child ... [ 2004-10-11 19:27:20]
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Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:31:43 PM AEST
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This is a great write. It is true, God is a Father, a Savior, and a Friend. Great write.

Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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good write. =]

Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:43:52 AM AEST
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Wonderful write.

God never sees a crowd--but individuals--and when He speaks to you, it's something you can ignore, or run from, but never miss.

Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:38:52 PM AEST
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Im glad you know. A lovely searching poem. He already knows, sees and loves.
~Hugs~
Lovingangel4u

Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by all4jesus_teen on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:28:10 AM AEST
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Great poem:)

Re: God, who is he? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I think many people question their faith at times, me being one of them. But try as you might to tune Him out, He always finds a way back in. Great write!
Take care and God bless : )

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