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Array ( [sid] => 67001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Womans Steel [time] => 2004-10-11 17:30:45 [hometext] => thought i'd do something along these lines, havn't before. please, read and comment till your hearts desire, - 01 - [bodytext] =>
Oh she's eternally here
swamped in bills and beers
needle and thread, treacles and breads
tiny tinted ebony snu
dusty in-gotten clouds
blood
blotten
blitten
bitten
bought from gain
lost through lessons on devotion
an eternal occurance, she waits for the night
a vast world to the pastures
of rubble, corn, wheat and fixtures
a head drives me
if i dont go crazy, i'll surely go insane

divers in some southen sea
exporing deep depths
tangled corridors, pipes and doors
seeps septh the depth carried and whored
left out, mitosys'ian mights and mitres
the gurle of life, reject, deject and defunkt
rabble, babble, infetted toule and toil
nocturne eclpses, she closes after the night
like a shop, but here, left to rot
be out in it on a pout, with lips, she suggests further
to tangle and to toil some more
just before the deal is done

from a bed shes eternally near
a curse be left awake at night
a war, never conquered but here [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 66 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
Womans Steel

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse




Oh she's eternally here
swamped in bills and beers
needle and thread, treacles and breads
tiny tinted ebony snu
dusty in-gotten clouds
blood
blotten
blitten
bitten
bought from gain
lost through lessons on devotion
an eternal occurance, she waits for the night
a vast world to the pastures
of rubble, corn, wheat and fixtures
a head drives me
if i dont go crazy, i'll surely go insane

divers in some southen sea
exporing deep depths
tangled corridors, pipes and doors
seeps septh the depth carried and whored
left out, mitosys'ian mights and mitres
the gurle of life, reject, deject and defunkt
rabble, babble, infetted toule and toil
nocturne eclpses, she closes after the night
like a shop, but here, left to rot
be out in it on a pout, with lips, she suggests further
to tangle and to toil some more
just before the deal is done

from a bed shes eternally near
a curse be left awake at night
a war, never conquered but here




Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-10-11 17:30:45]
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Re: Womans Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:33:47 PM AEST
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caught me up in this one well done
Michelle


Re: Womans Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:35:51 PM AEST
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good write. i loved the last stanza in this one.


Re: Womans Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:05:32 AM AEST
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WOW!! Cool!! "If I don't go crazy, I'll surely go insame" Yep, that's me! lol Really loved this. Different, but I like different. Write on.
Thumps ; 0)


Re: Womans Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:53:15 AM AEST
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great write! especialy the beggining!




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