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My little star has lost its shine,
The curtains closed on my life,
In my hand still lays the knife.

I didn’t want to but I did,
So here’s my suicide to bid,
I couldn’t stand it any longer,
Voices in my head got stronger.

They told me to end my pain,
Make an incision in my vein,
To watch the blood as it pumped out,
I was dying there I carried no doubt.

My life flashed before my eyes,
As ones does when they die,
I remembered all the pain & hurt,
I looked down at my blood stained shirt.

I smiled sweetly as I was going,
Faster & faster my blood was flowing,
A few minutes more I’d be dead,
With my death I now thee wed.

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I Now Thee Wed

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:29:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

With the reaper I shall dine,
My little star has lost its shine,
The curtains closed on my life,
In my hand still lays the knife.

I didn’t want to but I did,
So here’s my suicide to bid,
I couldn’t stand it any longer,
Voices in my head got stronger.

They told me to end my pain,
Make an incision in my vein,
To watch the blood as it pumped out,
I was dying there I carried no doubt.

My life flashed before my eyes,
As ones does when they die,
I remembered all the pain & hurt,
I looked down at my blood stained shirt.

I smiled sweetly as I was going,
Faster & faster my blood was flowing,
A few minutes more I’d be dead,
With my death I now thee wed.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-10-11 12:29:50]
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Re: I Now Thee Wed (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:46:39 PM AEST
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"oh pixie!!!"
please don't go. i know that's rich comming from me because i used to be suicidal and all, but i'm not any more and the last thing i want to see (or hear about, or what-ever), is you killing your-self.
please pixie!
I DON'T WANT YOU TO GO...!

Re: I Now Thee Wed (User Rating: 1 )
by nail-to-the-head on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:40:26 PM AEST
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really good write, just hope you dont do anything to harm yourself, take everything slowley and everthing will work out...

+ nail-to-the-head +

Re: I Now Thee Wed (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST
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well written though sad pixie stay around little longer, the world would a sadder place without in it
hope u feel better . . . Dorian : )

Re: I Now Thee Wed (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:01:26 PM AEST
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Pixie, you dampened my spirits here and drew a pall over my beautifull sunrise ... I hope all is well with you and that this is not as heartfelt as it sounds ... I am mentally morphing as many happy thoughts your way as I can !!!

Nazmythian ~

Re: I Now Thee Wed (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:07:04 AM AEST
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great!!!!!

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