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Array ( [sid] => 66952 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See U In The Light [time] => 2004-10-11 10:08:55 [hometext] => Its not my time, The doors of heaven are closed to me [bodytext] => Hey, can you here me? is anyone there?
Im in need of a friend right now or someone that cares
Ive been sitting here thinking going out of my head
my brains doing over-time im neglecting my bed
A hard job being regretful, brain aching 24/7
my final resting place i cant find as the doors are shut to heaven
I snapped myself out of it as i thought of you today
u sneaked back in my thoughts again, after i had sworn no way!
the strangest dreams, i jumped up in a wet chill
i thought we were reunited again, honestly it was real
i saw your lips where moving you where talking to me
we held a conversation, i saw you perfectly
I call for someone right now, not even to sit n talk
just someone to be shadowing me, me n my lonely walks
i hate the fact im here again im going in reverse
1 step forward 7months back, is this your promised curse
i no i'l see you again later, when i finally make up to bed
i probably even hear your voice echo in my head
So if your here right now, If You see these words i write
we will entwine when doors are open, i'll see you in the Light [comments] => 3 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 9 [informant] => LouisaMontagu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AnniversaryPoems )
See U In The Light

Contributed by LouisaMontagu on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:08:55 AM in AEST
Topic: AnniversaryPoems



Hey, can you here me? is anyone there?
Im in need of a friend right now or someone that cares
Ive been sitting here thinking going out of my head
my brains doing over-time im neglecting my bed
A hard job being regretful, brain aching 24/7
my final resting place i cant find as the doors are shut to heaven
I snapped myself out of it as i thought of you today
u sneaked back in my thoughts again, after i had sworn no way!
the strangest dreams, i jumped up in a wet chill
i thought we were reunited again, honestly it was real
i saw your lips where moving you where talking to me
we held a conversation, i saw you perfectly
I call for someone right now, not even to sit n talk
just someone to be shadowing me, me n my lonely walks
i hate the fact im here again im going in reverse
1 step forward 7months back, is this your promised curse
i no i'l see you again later, when i finally make up to bed
i probably even hear your voice echo in my head
So if your here right now, If You see these words i write
we will entwine when doors are open, i'll see you in the Light




Copyright © LouisaMontagu ... [ 2004-10-11 10:08:55]
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Re: See U In The Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Mihiri on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:39:26 AM AEST
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This is very nicely written. Someone near and dear to u has left us, if I understand correctly? Well, I'm sorry for your loss... But the gates of heaven will open... someday.
Luv, Mihiri


Re: See U In The Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:50:07 AM AEST
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A very powerful poem, of rememberence, a vivid picture painted, with feelings galore, a beautiful write, by a wonderful poet, thanks for inviting me to read this poem I really liked.


Re: See U In The Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Winter_Mist2004 on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 02:21:38 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem too. The only problem I saw was "Hey, can you here me?" Here is suppose to be "hear," I'm sorry I just had to point that out. Other then that. I love it!

-much love,
Wintermist2004




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