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And the only views I have are the

Miles of Nothing That Surround Me

As if I where in the center of a salt flat

With nothing in every horizon

But a flat reflection of how this world is

Empty and cold

But my world is not like that

My life is surrounded by a thousand faces

That I am grateful for but I tired of

I want to travel the world and see

Things that I do not know

I so tire of the familiar

And need to explore

There is so much of this world I have not seen

But till I can I remain

Feeling alone in the world

With the only views I have are the

Miles of Nothing That Surround Me

With nothing in every horizon

But a flat reflection of how this world is

Empty and cold
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Miles of Nothing That Surround Me

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sometimes I feel like I am alone

And the only views I have are the

Miles of Nothing That Surround Me

As if I where in the center of a salt flat

With nothing in every horizon

But a flat reflection of how this world is

Empty and cold

But my world is not like that

My life is surrounded by a thousand faces

That I am grateful for but I tired of

I want to travel the world and see

Things that I do not know

I so tire of the familiar

And need to explore

There is so much of this world I have not seen

But till I can I remain

Feeling alone in the world

With the only views I have are the

Miles of Nothing That Surround Me

With nothing in every horizon

But a flat reflection of how this world is

Empty and cold

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-10-11 01:18:09]
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Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:21:10 AM AEST
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This is nothing short of a great poem! It may be a simple poem but I think it has a very profound meaning within your poem. Great write!

Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:36:55 AM AEST
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Good writing , my friend and unfortunaly sometimes the world is cold and there are many miles of nuthing.
Very creatively written.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:52:05 AM AEST
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yeah nice work

Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:51:56 AM AEST
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A cool poem, one of wishes, that only you can forfill, one day I too would like to go and see some more of the world, and maybe oneday I will.
So I hope you do get to see the wonders, the sights, and get to swim in the freedom of wishes granted.

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