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Will you really save me Jesus?
I am asking you to show me what my life is all about
I am asking you to show me so I have no doubt

They praise your name in high places
They say I should be like you, to make your life my basis
I feel your love like the suns heat upon my face
I want too be so much like you but in your shadow I’m a disgrace

I am your disciple, a follower of Christ
But I am so unworthy of your love, so unworthy of the price
I want be so much more, to show your love to the world
To show that you are the salvation, the only true word

Without you my awesome god, we will all burn in hell
Your love is deeper than the deepest well
Forever will I follow, and spread your word
To every nation will I preach till everyone has heard
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Disciple's Creed

Contributed by socialmisfit on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

They say there’s someone out there who sees us
Will you really save me Jesus?
I am asking you to show me what my life is all about
I am asking you to show me so I have no doubt

They praise your name in high places
They say I should be like you, to make your life my basis
I feel your love like the suns heat upon my face
I want too be so much like you but in your shadow I’m a disgrace

I am your disciple, a follower of Christ
But I am so unworthy of your love, so unworthy of the price
I want be so much more, to show your love to the world
To show that you are the salvation, the only true word

Without you my awesome god, we will all burn in hell
Your love is deeper than the deepest well
Forever will I follow, and spread your word
To every nation will I preach till everyone has heard

Copyright Â© socialmisfit ... [ 2004-10-11 00:55:46]
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Re: Disciple's Creed (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:58:57 AM AEST
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This was beautiful. I wish I could write
poems of this genre without them sounding
so forced and lame. Thanks for sharing this it
inspired me.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Disciple's Creed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:03:21 AM AEST
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wow this is a very humble prayer and stance for your beleifs. None of us are worthy but when he died on the cross he made us worthy.
Great masterpeice of God's luv for all.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Disciple's Creed (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:12:21 AM AEST
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I am so glad that you're a believer in Christ. Hallelujah!!! And by the way, your poem is good and it reflects your loyalty not to the religion but to God Himself and that should be the way pal! Love this poem a lot. Thanks for sharing it with us all

Re: Disciple's Creed (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:48:01 AM AEST
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Loved reading you creed!
This is written really well...I like the song-like feel it has.
Sounds very honest and inspiring.
Truly...we are all so unworthy, ransomed by the precious blood of Christ.

Blessings...

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