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[aid] => mick
[title] => Begging Creation's Prayer
[time] => 2004-10-10 18:13:58
[hometext] => This is a what it says it is....please read and comment if you wish....
[bodytext] => Can you even see me? Are you listening to my plea? I'm reaching out for you To unlock this cage and set me free Do you even know I'm there? Am I close to getting through? I really need you to care I just need someone I can talk to My eyes no longer see beauty Only thoughts as black as night Life's no longer special And of it's meaning - I'm losing sight Now, more than ever, I need you Just an hour of your time You don't have to really listen to me Or is my demand such a crime? It hurts when I find myself looking at you And know you're not looking back Seeing right through me Focusing on everything I lack God, if you're there and listening Could you please just help me through? I don't know if you really exist Or if I even believe in you But nows your chance to show me That in life, there can be good Listen to my one last prayer And please answer, if you would Do you think you could find a place Amongst your angels there for me? A place where I could forever Spend a sleepless eternity A home that has no darkness And a light that always shines Do you think I could be accepted there? If I could just open up my eyes I come to you on my knees Begging you to fulfill this one last wish Please give me back the hope I've lost So I can get through all this I've lost my guardian angel She's left me broken and fallen behind So, if you just had one moment I won't take but a second of your time God - I'm praying to you one last time So if you're really existent in the heart I need you to take my hand now And on this endless journey - Together we can start I need you to befriend me now Because no one else will put forth An effort to understand this vacant soul Who knows not what se's worth So lead me away from evil And steer me clear of fatal temptation Listen to my prayer, my cry for mercy And save this broken creation. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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