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Array ( [sid] => 66866 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would You [time] => 2004-10-10 17:04:09 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for my two daughters Kristin and Brittany may the choices they choose be wise? [bodytext] => If you can live your life anyway you choose where noone critisizes,laughs,or passes judgement upon you. Would You
If you can live your life and never regret oneday, never feeling you've let your-self down at the ending of each and every day. Would You
If you can live your life and stay true to your-self live never for another live only for your-self. Would You
Life is what you make of it theres no guarentees,and you only get one try. and where yours leads or where it ends your the one who decides. So live your life wisely, the choices you make Beware, don't worry about what others may think its you your living for.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 14 [informant] => DeeSharpe63 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Would You

Contributed by DeeSharpe63 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:04:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

If you can live your life anyway you choose where noone critisizes,laughs,or passes judgement upon you. Would You
If you can live your life and never regret oneday, never feeling you've let your-self down at the ending of each and every day. Would You
If you can live your life and stay true to your-self live never for another live only for your-self. Would You
Life is what you make of it theres no guarentees,and you only get one try. and where yours leads or where it ends your the one who decides. So live your life wisely, the choices you make Beware, don't worry about what others may think its you your living for....

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Re: Would You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:30:24 PM AEST
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Very good write. I'm sure it will be cherished if not now on down the line.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Would You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:34:39 PM AEST
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I like this very much. I wish you could have defined it with more definite lines (just to make it easier to read.) But the words are true. I just wish it were that simple. Cheers!

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