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tears of blood
tired of feeling like krud
tears of love
tears of sorrow
thoughts of seeing no tomarrow
pain of this life
drowning in blood
sinking the knife
pressing it down
the only way
not to stay
cut out my soul
bleeding away
is left a hole
bloodshed down my wrist
my life...
making me so p*****
locked away
pushed against the wall
I take one final fall
I hear my screams
come along with twisted schemes
imprisonment comes with the light
the hours are free in the night
I look deep
inside myself
just wishing
that there was help
am I alive or just breathing
this life I am leading
in the shadows
is where I hide
darkness consumes
everything inside
pain flooding out
through my veins
tired of living
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This Life Insane

Contributed by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:36:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

tears of suicide
tears of blood
tired of feeling like krud
tears of love
tears of sorrow
thoughts of seeing no tomarrow
pain of this life
drowning in blood
sinking the knife
pressing it down
the only way
not to stay
cut out my soul
bleeding away
is left a hole
bloodshed down my wrist
my life...
making me so p*****
locked away
pushed against the wall
I take one final fall
I hear my screams
come along with twisted schemes
imprisonment comes with the light
the hours are free in the night
I look deep
inside myself
just wishing
that there was help
am I alive or just breathing
this life I am leading
in the shadows
is where I hide
darkness consumes
everything inside
pain flooding out
through my veins
tired of living
this life insane

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Re: This Life Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:48:46 AM AEST
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awwww this is just as sad and moving as the last one you posted, I really dont know what to say apart from keep writing, you will get a release from your pain that way *hugs*

takecare

pixie xx

Re: This Life Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:25:27 PM AEST
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as i told you in school on...friday? i think. great poem.

Re: This Life Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:36:55 PM AEST
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wow...very, very good. i really liked this one. its deep and very expressive.
it says alot. i liked the forum, and style of it. some very good parts in there!
i loved readin it. overall an awesome write!

¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤

Re: This Life Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by tormentedpixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:36:14 PM AEST
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Great write. I loved it. So sry you feel this way. It will all work out eventually. You expressed your emotions extremely well. Keep writing! ^_^

Re: This Life Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:56:00 PM AEST
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Hey babe...
Is this the one that u were writing the other night... I heard the 1st 15 lines over and over?
Good write... I like the title... a lil bit different than what we came up w/ isn't it?
U do have a great style of writing about u... and u r very talened too... whether u know it or not...
Love u... babe
Take care...
~Donna~

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