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Array ( [sid] => 66830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Very Last Time [time] => 2004-10-10 11:18:45 [hometext] => This has really got me thinking, and i can't really say anything to anyone about it, so i need your feedback-please. [bodytext] => and i said i'd never make you cry,
and that tonight would be the very last time.
so we danced under palm trees,
and you stepped on my dress.

we savored our time,
and held remembrance of what we loved best-
when you made me smile more times than i can possibly count,
and it was under your breath when you said,
"you look gorgeous"

well, i have to confess,
i told you "my situation, its complicated"
and you said that you could understand.
then you looked me in the eye and smiled-
now im missing that again.

the way you laugh at everything,
the way you look me square in the eye,
the way you're pleasant to be around,
the way that when you're touching me,
i couldn't care if i were to die. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Angela [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

The Very Last Time

Contributed by Angela on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:18:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

and i said i'd never make you cry,
and that tonight would be the very last time.
so we danced under palm trees,
and you stepped on my dress.

we savored our time,
and held remembrance of what we loved best-
when you made me smile more times than i can possibly count,
and it was under your breath when you said,
"you look gorgeous"

well, i have to confess,
i told you "my situation, its complicated"
and you said that you could understand.
then you looked me in the eye and smiled-
now im missing that again.

the way you laugh at everything,
the way you look me square in the eye,
the way you're pleasant to be around,
the way that when you're touching me,
i couldn't care if i were to die.

Copyright © Angela ... [ 2004-10-10 11:18:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Very Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:21:09 AM AEST
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awwww a lovely, sad and beautiful poem, thnaks for sharing,

pixie xx

Re: The Very Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:24:51 AM AEST
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*hugs* it's very vivid.

Re: The Very Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by tormentedpixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:38:08 PM AEST
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Lovely! Great write. ^_^

Re: The Very Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:16:49 PM AEST
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this is a verry compelling poem, your certaily not

dancing around any issues, a fine peice of writting

and a mature sence of style . . . Dorian : )

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