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Don’t leave me alone here to cry,
Take me with you when you leave,
In your death I never want to grieve.

We will live or die as one,
Never alone do I want to face the sun,
I want to walk hand in hand,
Without you with me life would be bland.

When you close your eyes for your last sleep,
In my heart is where I’ll forever keep,
My love for you is what makes me grow,
In heaven with you I want to go.

We will become angels together,
Leaving each other’s side, never,
Sitting upon our fluffy white clouds,
Loving each other, not making any sound.

Mark you’ll never leave my side,
Inside your soul is where I want to hide
Our love will live on even in our death,
Love knows not how to take its last breath.

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We Will Become Angels

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Take me with you when you die,
Don’t leave me alone here to cry,
Take me with you when you leave,
In your death I never want to grieve.

We will live or die as one,
Never alone do I want to face the sun,
I want to walk hand in hand,
Without you with me life would be bland.

When you close your eyes for your last sleep,
In my heart is where I’ll forever keep,
My love for you is what makes me grow,
In heaven with you I want to go.

We will become angels together,
Leaving each other’s side, never,
Sitting upon our fluffy white clouds,
Loving each other, not making any sound.

Mark you’ll never leave my side,
Inside your soul is where I want to hide
Our love will live on even in our death,
Love knows not how to take its last breath.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-10-10 11:02:12]
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Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:26:30 AM AEST
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This is really beautiful :)

Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:25:49 PM AEST
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beautifil work pixie, i love the whole idea of loving each other so much that you could go together ( without being suicidal!) well written.

wildejohnny.

Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:00:24 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem in the tradition of romeo and juliet

splendid peice of writting pixie as usual . . .

Dorian : )

Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:05:03 PM AEST
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Oh how very beautiful Pixie. Loved how you wanted to be together for all time.. a love so strong wonderful

Love Sweetangelukxxxxx

Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:31:33 PM AEST
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Sweetly touching......
Hugs
Jenni

Re: We Will Become Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:55:11 PM AEST
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"Love knows not how to take its last breath." I love that line ~ Because I believe it's true. Great Job.

J~

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