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Array ( [sid] => 66799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Every breath, Every heartbeat [time] => 2004-10-10 02:16:23 [hometext] => This poem is kinda cheesy lol...oh well, I wrote it in like 5 minutes, but decided to post it anyway. Comments are greatly appreciated! :) [bodytext] => I sit in the cold, dark night
and think to myself...
will anyone love me the way I love them?
will I ever have the chance to experience love at its best?
the thoughts run through my head
and tears fall down my cheeks
with every breath, and every heart beat,
I wish to myself that one day someone will love me
but wishes are useless to me, for they never come true...
because if they did...i'd have someone to love like you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vondutchchick08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Every breath, Every heartbeat

Contributed by vondutchchick08 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:16:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I sit in the cold, dark night
and think to myself...
will anyone love me the way I love them?
will I ever have the chance to experience love at its best?
the thoughts run through my head
and tears fall down my cheeks
with every breath, and every heart beat,
I wish to myself that one day someone will love me
but wishes are useless to me, for they never come true...
because if they did...i'd have someone to love like you.

Copyright © vondutchchick08 ... [ 2004-10-10 02:16:23]
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Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:34:19 AM AEST
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Ohh a cute poem

Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:54:23 AM AEST
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very sweet poem, sometimes i feel this way aswell

dizza

Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:54:09 AM AEST
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Hmm, I think you are being too hard on yourself on both accounts.

Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:18:34 PM AEST
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Your handle interested me, so I looked, regardless of the poem title.

I'll say this poem connected with me, on a personal level, with the final line. You had me misreading it, and perhaps unconsciously so, which is amusing me now, I must say.

Do you think that's 'cheesy'?

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