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Array ( [sid] => 66779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fallen [time] => 2004-10-09 23:02:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Catch me as I fall
Tell me your there and that it’s over
But no one’s there and I continue to fall
This truth push me into madness
I know I can stop the pain
If I drive it all away
As I go deeper
I see an image of you above
Don’t turn away
My words to you have blown away
Though they are still screaming your name
Don’t close your eyes
Don’t turn out the light
I’m frightened by what I see
Immobilized by my fears
I’m turning blind by my tears
But I can still be saved
Time have seem to pass by
So soon, I am now at the bottom
I stood up seeing
Angels at my feet
Whispering voices in my ear
Death before my eyes
I’m getting more scared
As I start to realize
I’ve been falling to meet my end
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ll [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

fallen

Contributed by ll on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Catch me as I fall
Tell me your there and that it’s over
But no one’s there and I continue to fall
This truth push me into madness
I know I can stop the pain
If I drive it all away
As I go deeper
I see an image of you above
Don’t turn away
My words to you have blown away
Though they are still screaming your name
Don’t close your eyes
Don’t turn out the light
I’m frightened by what I see
Immobilized by my fears
I’m turning blind by my tears
But I can still be saved
Time have seem to pass by
So soon, I am now at the bottom
I stood up seeing
Angels at my feet
Whispering voices in my ear
Death before my eyes
I’m getting more scared
As I start to realize
I’ve been falling to meet my end

Copyright Â© ll ... [ 2004-10-09 23:02:59]
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Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:26:56 PM AEST
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A lot of this seems to be Evanecense's work. I'd like to see what you have to say, I'm sure you're a talented writer, just work a little more with your own words.
Katie

Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:36:45 PM AEST
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amazing write. =]

Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:34:16 AM AEST
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nice, but i kno u tend 2 use others work...

Re: fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by apcfan on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:50:25 PM AEST
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don't put stuff up if it isn't yours. This only makes you look bad. I'm sure you can post you're work and if you can just leave poetry to those who can write

apcfan

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