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Array ( [sid] => 66777 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Bed [time] => 2004-10-09 22:29:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In My Bed

Hair falls over me

Pitch black

Like an overcastting sky

As your eyes look into mine

I see the ambiguous shades of mine

Dancing there in the clarity

I see every thing beautiful in my world

Only in your gentle sweet face

I love the way I feel

When inside you

Not just body and soul

But completely as

Your lips sweetly Mingle with mine

And mine with yours

With their simple lament

They love

The taste of your

Budding oleander lips

As I am further consumed by you

And feel nothing but bliss

With your legs on the sides of mine

As I enjoy this pleasant familiar

With a girl made of the night

With skin that dims the moons pale light

And eyes that frail the stars in sight

We are two imperfect strands of one soul

That find perfection when joined

And our bodies warm this cold universe

So much that the world can feel

What we bring to life in my bed

When our lips part

You look at me

And kiss my tired desperate brow

And leave me forever healed

Then I know my purpose

And feel my birth

As you my angel reveal your wings to me

How did I ever make you fall for me?

How do you make me feel this way?

I feel so good when I am with you

I feel more than twice blessed

More than complete and completely overwhelmed

That you even noticed me

I don’t just want to be like this tonight

But tomorrow and the day after

But for my whole life and yours

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In My Bed

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



In My Bed

Hair falls over me

Pitch black

Like an overcastting sky

As your eyes look into mine

I see the ambiguous shades of mine

Dancing there in the clarity

I see every thing beautiful in my world

Only in your gentle sweet face

I love the way I feel

When inside you

Not just body and soul

But completely as

Your lips sweetly Mingle with mine

And mine with yours

With their simple lament

They love

The taste of your

Budding oleander lips

As I am further consumed by you

And feel nothing but bliss

With your legs on the sides of mine

As I enjoy this pleasant familiar

With a girl made of the night

With skin that dims the moons pale light

And eyes that frail the stars in sight

We are two imperfect strands of one soul

That find perfection when joined

And our bodies warm this cold universe

So much that the world can feel

What we bring to life in my bed

When our lips part

You look at me

And kiss my tired desperate brow

And leave me forever healed

Then I know my purpose

And feel my birth

As you my angel reveal your wings to me

How did I ever make you fall for me?

How do you make me feel this way?

I feel so good when I am with you

I feel more than twice blessed

More than complete and completely overwhelmed

That you even noticed me

I don’t just want to be like this tonight

But tomorrow and the day after

But for my whole life and yours





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Re: In My Bed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:33:49 PM AEST
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Beautifull.
luv, huggs,smiles,
emy


Re: In My Bed (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:46:01 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful and amazing! I love this!
Katie


Re: In My Bed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:52:58 AM AEST
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awwww this is wonderfully written and so very beautiful,

pixie xx


Re: In My Bed (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:17:52 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful...just like all the others...
you are beautiful forever...

luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx




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