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Array ( [sid] => 66767 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sweet Smell of October [time] => 2004-10-09 21:23:39 [hometext] => I love October! [bodytext] => The sweet smell of October
Fills my lungs
The simple beauty of the leaves
Falling to the ground
Brings back memories of childhood
And being with old friends
To walk down the street and smell the
Sweet October scent is all I really need
To bring some light to my deadend heart
As I slowly stroll along I hear the leaves rustle
And the birds sing
And watch the children playing catch or kickball just for fun
It's so nice to see them run along, and play with their families
A dad and son playing ball then raking autumn leaves
And by the time I reach my doorstep I really hate to admit it
But the sweet scent of October and all that goes along with it
Has forced me to break into a smile [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Katie2008 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

The Sweet Smell of October

Contributed by Katie2008 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:23:39 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The sweet smell of October
Fills my lungs
The simple beauty of the leaves
Falling to the ground
Brings back memories of childhood
And being with old friends
To walk down the street and smell the
Sweet October scent is all I really need
To bring some light to my deadend heart
As I slowly stroll along I hear the leaves rustle
And the birds sing
And watch the children playing catch or kickball just for fun
It's so nice to see them run along, and play with their families
A dad and son playing ball then raking autumn leaves
And by the time I reach my doorstep I really hate to admit it
But the sweet scent of October and all that goes along with it
Has forced me to break into a smile

Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2004-10-09 21:23:39]
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Re: The Sweet Smell of October (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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Dang girl this was really good. I could say this really fixs the poem

Re: The Sweet Smell of October (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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wow really really good write....i could really get a picture of october....almost made me like october but im a summer person through and through haha

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