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I'd give anything just to hear your voice
No more slurrs and drunken goodbyes
Just a glimpse of my father unveiled by the lies
Hurt clenched at my heart, when you'd walk away
Can't even look at me...am I the one to blame?
It wasn't always this way,
Sitting on your lap I was daddy's little girl,ready for anything we could take on the world
But everythings changed, not a moment the same
To get your attention I would fall to my knees, take the blood from these gaping wounds and write those three unspoken words at your feet,
Even then chances are you couldn't see far to taken by your intoxicity...but just in case...I love you daddy [comments] => 8 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 13 [informant] => emocutie07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me

Contributed by emocutie07 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 04:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I couldn't make you choose, afraid of your choice.
I'd give anything just to hear your voice
No more slurrs and drunken goodbyes
Just a glimpse of my father unveiled by the lies
Hurt clenched at my heart, when you'd walk away
Can't even look at me...am I the one to blame?
It wasn't always this way,
Sitting on your lap I was daddy's little girl,ready for anything we could take on the world
But everythings changed, not a moment the same
To get your attention I would fall to my knees, take the blood from these gaping wounds and write those three unspoken words at your feet,
Even then chances are you couldn't see far to taken by your intoxicity...but just in case...I love you daddy

Copyright © emocutie07 ... [ 2004-10-09 16:36:56]
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Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:42:13 PM AEST
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This is so sad, I'm sorry you're going through this, but it's not your fault! :[
Katie

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:25:25 AM AEST
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powerful and emotional write...makes me think of my father and mother...

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
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this poem made me cry... I painfully understand what you are going thru with your dad... you are not alone... check out my poem "Daddy's An Addict" and you'll see what I mean. you ever need me email/pm me... great emotion filled write.
~screwup

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:23:19 PM AEST
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this a very emotional write....im sooo sorry....great poem

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:06:15 PM AEST
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Wow...my dad is exactly like this also...I will always be here for you whenever you need me... I love you always and forever

Love, Always and Forever, No Matter What
Mason

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:31:13 PM AEST
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Very emotional and so, so sad....

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:04:42 PM AEST
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I really feel this poem...a great write. I know where you'r coming from, it sounds like my dad about 5 years ago and my mom now. Its tough, but stay strong.
~Kaylee

Re: Daddy's little girl ..the drink or me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
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you said you wanted to see him unveiled correct? do you really want to though, being the way your father is, an alchoholic, he would probably fair worse sober than drunk. people drink like that for a reason, i know i did. usually depression and whatnot, i am sorry to hear about your situatiopn though and hope things start looking up for you, crystal. i loved the poem and the concept, great write!!!!! oh and take care of mason, ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! peace and love,

DR

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