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Array ( [sid] => 66705 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In my mind [time] => 2004-10-09 11:02:31 [hometext] => ShadowDaughter gave me the idea for this song ages ago, it didnt make it to the studio but here are the lyrics, its METAL and about a cutter. the lyrics in brackets are clean vox [bodytext] => (are you ready to do it, are you ready to feel it, are you ready to do it)

Caught, up to her neck in despair
Self mutilation is
The only solution,

Her source of strength in hard times
Been here before
and came out just fine

(I pray to take away the pain that I feel inside)

CHORUS
In my mind as I slice
(Im inside you)
my glinting edge on shivering skin
(Im inside)
Tongue the blood suck my kiss
(I wont leave you)
Remember life from my love bite
(While your mine)

The hate in their hearts she wears
On her arms shoulders...calves and chest
Deliciously socially twisted
A new addition to the scars that she wears

(I pray to take away the pain that I feel inside)

CHORUS+Extended
In my mind as I slice
(Im inside you)
My biting kiss brings the relief you crave
(Im inside)
Not like them we cut our own path
(I wont leave you)
Monuments to hard times, survived
(While you're mine)

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time)

CHORUS

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time)

Extended chorus

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 34 [informant] => ArdRi79 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

In my mind

Contributed by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:02:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

(are you ready to do it, are you ready to feel it, are you ready to do it)

Caught, up to her neck in despair
Self mutilation is
The only solution,

Her source of strength in hard times
Been here before
and came out just fine

(I pray to take away the pain that I feel inside)

CHORUS
In my mind as I slice
(Im inside you)
my glinting edge on shivering skin
(Im inside)
Tongue the blood suck my kiss
(I wont leave you)
Remember life from my love bite
(While your mine)

The hate in their hearts she wears
On her arms shoulders...calves and chest
Deliciously socially twisted
A new addition to the scars that she wears

(I pray to take away the pain that I feel inside)

CHORUS+Extended
In my mind as I slice
(Im inside you)
My biting kiss brings the relief you crave
(Im inside)
Not like them we cut our own path
(I wont leave you)
Monuments to hard times, survived
(While you're mine)

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time)

CHORUS

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time)

Extended chorus

(Whenever I want I will make you cry)

I will fight

(Whenever I want I can change your world for the very last time)

Copyright © ArdRi79 ... [ 2004-10-09 11:02:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:02:10 AM AEST
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::applauds:: truely amazing. brilliant song. very well written.

Re: In my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:12:27 AM AEST
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I always admired song writers!! That was well written!

mckayla

Re: In my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:32:07 PM AEST
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nicely written i always want to better as song writing and u are doing a good job at it

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