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Array ( [sid] => 66704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God''s Delightful Perfume [time] => 2004-10-09 10:36:38 [hometext] => this is religious but I put it under dreams and wishes as I dream and wish this world were a better place! [bodytext] => Inhale the air
that beautiful breeze,
the sweetest perfume
for us to breath.
It tickles softly
against ones cheek,
try to kiss it
it is hard to seek.
Invisible it is
try to explain
the colour we see,
reach out in vain.
The knowledge of thee
there's a word in God's home,
for each undiscribable thing
once united with Him we rome.
God is so Masterful
so Intelligent and Bright,
to think that He invented
everything just perfect and right.
How can any human begin
to make a fluffy white cloud,
or an awsome rainbow
after thunder and lightening is so loud.
It is more awsome than any movie
or any live band on stage,
the feeling you get
vibrates your rib cage.
The fresh morning dew
is precious treasure hardly noticed,
the way it sits on plants of beauty
God wants us to see this at His party He's hosted.
The party called life with the sound of innocent birds
in the mornings were invited
it's a treat to hear this calmness
before humans hussle and bussle is sighted.
Through this man made madness
God has made things plain,
but us humans
desire to have things quicker yet again.
Where is all that innocence
our forests are a gorgeous sight,
but slowly we ignore God's word
we get rid of all the beauty -God's delight.
So when you breath in
each breath of God's giving air,
treasure it as us humans
destroy it day by day without a care!
~
one day God's fresh air will not be there!
~

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God''s Delightful Perfume

Contributed by inoc on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Inhale the air
that beautiful breeze,
the sweetest perfume
for us to breath.
It tickles softly
against ones cheek,
try to kiss it
it is hard to seek.
Invisible it is
try to explain
the colour we see,
reach out in vain.
The knowledge of thee
there's a word in God's home,
for each undiscribable thing
once united with Him we rome.
God is so Masterful
so Intelligent and Bright,
to think that He invented
everything just perfect and right.
How can any human begin
to make a fluffy white cloud,
or an awsome rainbow
after thunder and lightening is so loud.
It is more awsome than any movie
or any live band on stage,
the feeling you get
vibrates your rib cage.
The fresh morning dew
is precious treasure hardly noticed,
the way it sits on plants of beauty
God wants us to see this at His party He's hosted.
The party called life with the sound of innocent birds
in the mornings were invited
it's a treat to hear this calmness
before humans hussle and bussle is sighted.
Through this man made madness
God has made things plain,
but us humans
desire to have things quicker yet again.
Where is all that innocence
our forests are a gorgeous sight,
but slowly we ignore God's word
we get rid of all the beauty -God's delight.
So when you breath in
each breath of God's giving air,
treasure it as us humans
destroy it day by day without a care!
~
one day God's fresh air will not be there!
~

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-10-09 10:36:38]
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Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:49:39 AM AEST
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Marvelous piece of work here. I read it several times. My dreams and wishes are the same. To make the world a better place for all.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:14:47 PM AEST
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inoc, this need not be disguised as anything but an act of love beautiful peice of writting, i don't
hide the fact i'm atheist, u need not be asshamed
of beleiving in the almighty, they who do not like it
surpress but themselves . . .

Dorian : ) * * * * * * * * * *

Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:56:27 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. God did give man dominion over the earth to subdue it. How very unfortunate sometimes that many of us including myself at times take the pristine nature of innosence for granted.
The untouched and primal lands still makes me stand in awe of what God has given to me when I think about it. Thanks for reminding me of that.

Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:06:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem... Most people do not recognize the sheer amazingness of nature around us... We're too used to it...
Hugs,
Hur

Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:29:47 AM AEST
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Reminds me of the last book in the Narnia series where everything was the most beautiful you'd ever seen on earth, only better.
BRAVO!
Stitch

Re: God''s Delightful Perfume (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:48:29 AM AEST
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Indeed, His creation called Earth is a lovely place, though fallen. Just think, the beauty of this world doesn't even hold a candle to being in the presence of His glory for eternity in Heaven.

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