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[title] => Untiled
[time] => 2004-10-08 23:40:34
[hometext] => I wrote this and i never came up with a title, sorry
[bodytext] => There are so many parts of me i dont want you to see. Im so screwed up inside i just want to hide. If you only knew what went through my head while you said the things you said. You would understand now why i picked up that knife. and decided to give up my life. The memories came flooding back all at once, my dreams turned to nightmares all at once. They haunt my now until my death. Lets end this now. Pick up the gun pull the trigger with the bang it all goes away...
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Untiled
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BloodyTears5
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:40:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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There are so many parts of me i dont want you to see. Im so screwed up inside i just want to hide. If you only knew what went through my head while you said the things you said. You would understand now why i picked up that knife. and decided to give up my life. The memories came flooding back all at once, my dreams turned to nightmares all at once. They haunt my now until my death. Lets end this now. Pick up the gun pull the trigger with the bang it all goes away...
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Re: Untiled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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| excellent write. dont let others affect you... |
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Re: Untiled
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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Execellent write and may I say i can relate. I don't like to rtust anyone or talk to anyone either because they don't understand how messed up i am but only if they could see they are part of what made me become me. Those nightmares can be deadly so try to think positive..
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