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Array ( [sid] => 66664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kiss the stars with you [time] => 2004-10-08 22:55:14 [hometext] => ..comments please <3 [bodytext] => Entwined we lay hushed, as darkness grasps us from the world
The sky confides its deepest secrets, spreading an intricate blanket, over are hearts
Shooting stars dance among the clouds, whispering their lullabyes
Slumber lures us in, and slowly we drift off to sleep.....
Feeling the rays of sun cascading against my face, I awake, already missing the night
Turning to you my insides melt, are stars dancing brightly in your eyes
Kissing you tenderly....I smile...anticipating the next time I'll kiss the stars with you
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Kiss the stars with you

Contributed by emocutie07 on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:55:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Entwined we lay hushed, as darkness grasps us from the world
The sky confides its deepest secrets, spreading an intricate blanket, over are hearts
Shooting stars dance among the clouds, whispering their lullabyes
Slumber lures us in, and slowly we drift off to sleep.....
Feeling the rays of sun cascading against my face, I awake, already missing the night
Turning to you my insides melt, are stars dancing brightly in your eyes
Kissing you tenderly....I smile...anticipating the next time I'll kiss the stars with you




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Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:59:07 PM AEST
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I like this. "Kiss the stars with you" is very picturesque. Cheers!


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:07:48 PM AEST
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comfort by romance, great write.
take care,
shanarah...


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by cauchy3 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:02:19 AM AEST
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For star i speak no more because there is blows of shines like hush-moneys


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST
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oi pa... gives me the evening shivers! saucy! i love it!

-smelly_man!


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:14:08 PM AEST
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Well done! A poetic, tender piece. Long live romantic poetry!

The sky confides its deepest secrets, spreading an intricate blanket

Excellent line.

Andrew


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:11:56 AM AEST
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Oh my..
That was amazing
I feeling of warmth flew over me through reading this

5 out of 5.


Re: Kiss the stars with you (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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This is around the millionth time I've read this...I miss you Crystal...This poem is amazing, just as the poet who wrote it is...I love you with all my heart

*kissing you*
Mason




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