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Feet in the water
Starin into heaven
Lettin my mind wonder
I feel the mud between my toes
And let the wind comb my hair
It keeps getting darker
And there’s trees everywhere
It feels like someone’s watchin
Justin waitin back there
I get up and start walkin
Faster and faster
Runnin though the woods
But he’s much faster
A strong arm grasp
A loud explosive noise
The pain in my side
Getting stronger and stronger
Down in the dirt
With blood everywhere
The taste of salty tears
Run across my face
He sittin on my back
With the gun to my head
I hear one more loud noise
Now all I see is black
That’s it I’m dead
But why was I attacked [comments] => 6 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => tractorbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Out in The Woods

Contributed by tractorbabe on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sittin by the river
Feet in the water
Starin into heaven
Lettin my mind wonder
I feel the mud between my toes
And let the wind comb my hair
It keeps getting darker
And there’s trees everywhere
It feels like someone’s watchin
Justin waitin back there
I get up and start walkin
Faster and faster
Runnin though the woods
But he’s much faster
A strong arm grasp
A loud explosive noise
The pain in my side
Getting stronger and stronger
Down in the dirt
With blood everywhere
The taste of salty tears
Run across my face
He sittin on my back
With the gun to my head
I hear one more loud noise
Now all I see is black
That’s it I’m dead
But why was I attacked

Copyright Â© tractorbabe ... [ 2004-10-08 20:40:00]
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Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:58:39 PM AEST
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wow.

Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:12:04 PM AEST
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That was interesting. I can't answer your question. Your poem leaves a lot of questions though.

Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:46:56 PM AEST
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good write.

Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:58:44 PM AEST
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awakened my the thoughts, very interesting.
take care,
shanarah...

Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by ll on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:13:07 AM AEST
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good write.very mysterious.

Re: Out in The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:15:48 AM AEST
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This was good....i liked it alot

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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