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Array ( [sid] => 66625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will you watch me fall? [time] => 2004-10-08 17:03:58 [hometext] => I have a friend that would do anything for me. And I can't stand it. Because every time I mess up, I know I'm hurting him. And I can't stand lying to him anymore. [bodytext] => all this empty repetition,
you know that I can't stand it.
fill this page with worthless words
about what I've been handed.
the world is on a killing spree
they cannot know what I've become.
the stars burn on in agony,
i cannot fathom what's to come.

the words are swimming.
the prescription is wrong.
i've lost the thought, the feeling's gone.
still my head is killing me
i swear i've heard this song before.
the light from the window lights up your face.
everyone watches me fall in disgrace.

for you I'll fake another smile
and bleed to death inside.
I'm choking on these silent tears.
In whom can I confide?
and I will cover up my scars
so I can hide the hurt below.
now I will slowly suffocate
from all the falsities I show.

the words are swimming.
the prescription is wrong.
i've lost the thought, the feeling's gone.
still my head is killing me
i swear i've heard this song before.
the light from the window lights up your face.
everyone watches me fall in disgrace.

I have to get out of here. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 34 [informant] => liquidchaos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Will you watch me fall?

Contributed by liquidchaos on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



all this empty repetition,
you know that I can't stand it.
fill this page with worthless words
about what I've been handed.
the world is on a killing spree
they cannot know what I've become.
the stars burn on in agony,
i cannot fathom what's to come.

the words are swimming.
the prescription is wrong.
i've lost the thought, the feeling's gone.
still my head is killing me
i swear i've heard this song before.
the light from the window lights up your face.
everyone watches me fall in disgrace.

for you I'll fake another smile
and bleed to death inside.
I'm choking on these silent tears.
In whom can I confide?
and I will cover up my scars
so I can hide the hurt below.
now I will slowly suffocate
from all the falsities I show.

the words are swimming.
the prescription is wrong.
i've lost the thought, the feeling's gone.
still my head is killing me
i swear i've heard this song before.
the light from the window lights up your face.
everyone watches me fall in disgrace.

I have to get out of here.




Copyright © liquidchaos ... [ 2004-10-08 17:03:58]
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Re: Will you watch me fall? (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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Deep and very touching. Loved it and truelly unique and talented wirte.
ALINA


Re: Will you watch me fall? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:28:23 PM AEST
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amazing write. hurt is as natural as the sun rising, i think your friend would appreciate it more to hear the truth from you and get hurt, than be in the dark...




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