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beloved tears

Contributed by clowns_can_burn on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:19:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My love is broken by you and your selfish games you ripped out my heart and shredded it now i'm standing all alone, in the dark As i watch my life drip away from my wrist i realized what i once felt for you has decayed along with my soul, and all i can do is cry cry for the life i wasted,for the life that i could have had, for the life that is dying

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Re: beloved tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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a very powerful write,

pixie xx

Re: beloved tears (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:43:16 PM AEST
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This is really intense. It's a good poem. :)

Re: beloved tears (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:25:05 PM AEST
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Wow, very strong meaning. unique write.
I like it. take care,
shanarah...

Re: beloved tears (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:46:38 AM AEST
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beautful poem...i feel for you...i know what its like to be alone...if you need a friend, im here...i hope everything works out for you...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx

Re: beloved tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:13:33 PM AEST
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short and sweet. very beautiful. great write!

'As i watch my life drip away from my wrist'

love that line. very good poem!

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