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A shepherd-boy's song
Contributed by
Tanmaya
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:41:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Fair is the sky my soul’s eye seeks,
blue like the sleep under arms of trees.
Over mountain and vale, my road treads,
over dark storms gathering in sleepy dells.
Where the rising sun sounds trumpets of light,
and at last, rests in a gentle, humming night.
Standing upon a wind, gazing upon a star…
I have spun upon the dusk, myriads of dreams.
In the emerald and jade of an endless pasture,
I have danced free… and felt richer than kings.
And when the summer brings oceans of verdure,
I am the captain of a thousand ships.
Deep is the sky where my hope breathes,
keen is the air, and unsullied is every breeze.
Sweet are the tunes the song-birds teach me,
and sweeter my home… upon the beckoning hills.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-10-08 07:41:00]
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:58:04 AM AEST
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Wonderful... A magical write that opens up a nearly forgotten world....
Hugs,
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by inoc on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:01:21 AM AEST
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so clever
so awsome
cheers!~ |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:27:00 AM AEST
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| A sweet poem, flowing stanzas, and crystal clears images...fitting in with the whole overall veiw, totally rocked. |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Remy on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:58:27 PM AEST
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something tells me you're a bit of a romantic, but so is the shepard boy probably! dude this amazing, nice...
-smelly_man! |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:51:54 AM AEST
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| Ah.... this poem is just simply beautiful. It pictures a peaceful scene. I just love it. Gives me lots of peace |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:23:22 AM AEST
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This is pastoral poetry at its best. Beautiful.
Slàn!
Andrew |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Archie on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:34:32 PM AEST
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| This is AWESOME! Iwas talking to some one about the journies poetry takes us on. I liked taking this one very much. |
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Re: A shepherd-boy's song
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:23:08 PM AEST
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Masterpiece. I love the way you are capable, with just simple words, to transport a reader to so many distant worlds.
Take care.
David |
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