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Array ( [sid] => 66562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-10-08 03:04:17 [hometext] => A poem of fear, lonliness and hurt [bodytext] => Dark, Fear, Confusion, Hurt
To be alone makes me feel like dirt
People walk on my feelings without a second look
They read the emotions on my face like a book
They laugh and scorn and point and say
She's just another loser, let's chase her away
Only I know how I feel inside
I just want to run and hide
I can't take the pain and their terrible laughter
So I run away further and faster
Into a bottomless pit of despair
It comforts me when I am there
No one will laugh or make fun
I won't be seeing anyone
And then I realize what I've done
And I cry
I am alone, I wonder why? [comments] => 9 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Dreamer_Of_Death [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Alone

Contributed by Dreamer_Of_Death on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:04:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dark, Fear, Confusion, Hurt
To be alone makes me feel like dirt
People walk on my feelings without a second look
They read the emotions on my face like a book
They laugh and scorn and point and say
She's just another loser, let's chase her away
Only I know how I feel inside
I just want to run and hide
I can't take the pain and their terrible laughter
So I run away further and faster
Into a bottomless pit of despair
It comforts me when I am there
No one will laugh or make fun
I won't be seeing anyone
And then I realize what I've done
And I cry
I am alone, I wonder why?

Copyright © Dreamer_Of_Death ... [ 2004-10-08 03:04:17]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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wow, this is awesome!

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:12:45 AM AEST
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That was a really good write, I'm very impressed. Just so you know, I have felt the exact same way, but things have gotten better. I hope they get better for you.

-Kevin

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:25:38 AM AEST
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This was a great poem because you made it easy for people to get in touch with what you feel. I wrote a poem like that; I have not posted it as of yet. I don't know if I ever will. The emotions from feeling alone are often so strong that we do not notice people offering their friendship to us.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:47:55 AM AEST
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I liked this one more than the other one, I liked the way you pushed your self to lonliness and then when you found yourself alone you wondered why?! The last thing I want to say is "You can run but you just can't hide so face your fears, move on and leave your past behind".

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:38:12 AM AEST
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I know how that can feel and you described it well. Good job

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:51:41 AM AEST
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wow,great expression and feeling used here,

pixie xx

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:24:40 PM AEST
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Deep and to close to truth......*s*

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:02:17 PM AEST
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very deep and emotional poem... great write.
~screwup

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:05:23 AM AEST
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you know that i too have been through this, and it had not gotten better untill recent times when I can to accept just what it is that I am. I am here for you, you know that, but I feel it must be said yet again.

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