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That I Should Die - revised

Contributed by MomentInTime on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:27:39 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



God said to Jesus,
“Stand up my son, you’re now a man.
These doubts you’re having,
I’ll try to clear as best I can.
Though if you heed me, this much is true:
you will be crucified
it makes so little difference what I do.”

Well now young Jesus
said “Dad you know what’s going down.
People aren’t friendly
and those who fear have left this town;
still we continue, full steam ahead,
so please do tell me father:
can I still come see you when I’m dead.”

- chorus I -
"I’m not that happy that I should die
when I’m not even sure I know the reason why;
to sacrifice me, what will it serve?
Is it to save their some souls
when that is really
more than they deserve. "

God didn’t argue,
God knows at times faith can be weak.
As re-inforcement
to Jesus God these words did speak:
“Paths there are many, most lead astray,
look well inside your heart
and maybe you will learn there is a way.”

-chorus II -
"I’m not that happy that you’re to die
when I’m the only one who knows the reason why;
to sacrifice you, it breaks my heart,
though it will save your soul
and you and me
will never be apart."

PS. I intend recording this on the weekend and posting it on my web page.




Copyright © MomentInTime ... [ 2004-10-08 01:27:39]
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Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:14:07 AM AEST
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YEAH! This lyrics kick major butt!


Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:29:07 AM AEST
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So lovely Jordan...and from the heart..PM me when you have this on your site please

una canzone bella da un uomo bello grazie il mio amico

Kelly xxx


Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:55:48 AM AEST
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Very cool Jorden,

Looking forward to hearing it.


Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:50:01 PM AEST
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curious... i might take some interest in hearing this. not a bad write either!

-smelly_man!


Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:53:00 AM AEST
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A beautiful well-written song lyric. Hallelujah!


Re: That I Should Die - revised (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:46:15 PM AEST
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I like this one.
And you are right, we didn't deserve it.




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