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Array ( [sid] => 66550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Because... I love You... [time] => 2004-10-08 00:18:59 [hometext] => Dedicated to an *adopted* niece... because I love u... thanks for the title... comments welcome... [bodytext] => When I look into your eyes...
I can feel your pain... burning deep inside
It's transferred between us...
Flowing so free...
Flooding our souls

But I still can't imagine your pain...
The pain... you feel each and every night
I just can't imagine... what you're going through
Each and every time...
I wish that I could help you...
My heart breaks... in two... each time I see your pain
And I can feel it filter through your voice...
Each time you speak to me

You know... babe...
I love you...
But there's nothing... I can say or even do
That will help you
I can feel you drowning deep inside your pain
It's swim or die...
As the pain echoes through your mind
Thoughts and feelings resounding through time
Like a lifetime of memories...
Fading from the heart
Leaving not a trace behind...
Blending into the nothingness of life

But our lives are like ripples upon the pond
We touch each lives... in ways...
We don't even know or understand
We touch both foe and friend
We let our love flow... to the end
'Cause our actions are everlasting impressions
Our words may one day cease to exist
But our actions speak louder than our words...
Echoing on through time

From the very moment...
When I first held you in my arms
You've been one of the most perfect expressions...
In my life...
A melody of love

You say... that I've saved your life in every possible way...
I've heard that many... many times before
But I've have no idea of the countless lives I've saved
Or how many lives I've touched... with no name
By just being there...
By reaching out with just a word... a touch... a smile
If I can save just one life...
Then... it's all been worth while...

Because... I love you...


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Because... I love You...

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:18:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



When I look into your eyes...
I can feel your pain... burning deep inside
It's transferred between us...
Flowing so free...
Flooding our souls

But I still can't imagine your pain...
The pain... you feel each and every night
I just can't imagine... what you're going through
Each and every time...
I wish that I could help you...
My heart breaks... in two... each time I see your pain
And I can feel it filter through your voice...
Each time you speak to me

You know... babe...
I love you...
But there's nothing... I can say or even do
That will help you
I can feel you drowning deep inside your pain
It's swim or die...
As the pain echoes through your mind
Thoughts and feelings resounding through time
Like a lifetime of memories...
Fading from the heart
Leaving not a trace behind...
Blending into the nothingness of life

But our lives are like ripples upon the pond
We touch each lives... in ways...
We don't even know or understand
We touch both foe and friend
We let our love flow... to the end
'Cause our actions are everlasting impressions
Our words may one day cease to exist
But our actions speak louder than our words...
Echoing on through time

From the very moment...
When I first held you in my arms
You've been one of the most perfect expressions...
In my life...
A melody of love

You say... that I've saved your life in every possible way...
I've heard that many... many times before
But I've have no idea of the countless lives I've saved
Or how many lives I've touched... with no name
By just being there...
By reaching out with just a word... a touch... a smile
If I can save just one life...
Then... it's all been worth while...

Because... I love you...






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Re: Because... I love You... (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:22:35 AM AEST
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beautiful heartfelt and real...good job


Re: Because... I love You... (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:41:54 AM AEST
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hey love,
thanks for the poem... love you too. that was a very inspirational write, as always... really thankfull you could always be here for me... great write babe, love you much
~Deanna


Re: Because... I love You... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST
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Another masterpeice of compassion.
I'm sure she will always cherish this write as she no doubt cherises u.
luv, huggs, proud,
yo momma,
emy




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