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A love with no meaning.

Eyes mirror failure.
Pleasant times are but a blur.

Memories are disposed.
And where are you?
Heaven only knows.

These tears are cried in vain.
Etched in my thoughts is your name.

Inside my head is a living hell.
Your secrets you could never tell.

My face plead you to put trust in me.
But your eyes refused to see.

A body tenses underneath your fingertips.
A breath is robbed from your kiss.

Uneasy nights.
Petty fights.

No point of return.
I guess we will never learn.

Wounds, both shallow and deep
always seemed to rob me of sleep.

The ignorant promote fear
My heart bleeds with tears.

Still confused.
Did I really have much to lose?

Yes, you are gone, but what does it mean?
Is there a flaw I have overseen?

I love you more than you will ever know.
But still, you are the one who let go. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mekare [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Tangent

Contributed by Mekare on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:44:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A heart not worth redeeming
A love with no meaning.

Eyes mirror failure.
Pleasant times are but a blur.

Memories are disposed.
And where are you?
Heaven only knows.

These tears are cried in vain.
Etched in my thoughts is your name.

Inside my head is a living hell.
Your secrets you could never tell.

My face plead you to put trust in me.
But your eyes refused to see.

A body tenses underneath your fingertips.
A breath is robbed from your kiss.

Uneasy nights.
Petty fights.

No point of return.
I guess we will never learn.

Wounds, both shallow and deep
always seemed to rob me of sleep.

The ignorant promote fear
My heart bleeds with tears.

Still confused.
Did I really have much to lose?

Yes, you are gone, but what does it mean?
Is there a flaw I have overseen?

I love you more than you will ever know.
But still, you are the one who let go.

Copyright © Mekare ... [ 2004-10-07 16:44:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tangent (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:51:08 PM AEST
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Sounds like you have experienced and are experiencing a lot of emotional pain. I pity you. I wonder why he does not trust you? Maybe he was hurt before too. It does take a heart a long time to heal. Strong poem.
~Carrie~

Re: Tangent (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:34:20 PM AEST
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brilliant write. one of the best writes ive read in a long time. excellent flow and rhyme. powerful and emotional.

everything has a price. and pain is the price of many things....

Re: Tangent (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:36:22 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
Well written-
Love is only the prodegy of (TWO) hearts that care.

Re: Tangent (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 05:59:53 PM AEST
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Sometimes i do wonder if it is worth to love someone if they are just going to thrust a cold sharp dagger into your heart. Great write!

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