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When into my soul I took a peep
Ashamed of the person I let myself be
Anger and hurt seemed to paralyze me

I’ve sometimes wondered why God lets me live
What to this world can I possibly give?
Why is there life in a lifeless being?
From whom all Angels of Good are fleeing?

I’ve recently heard a Voice so pure
Deep within me, It’s God’s I’m sure
He told me of His Love, Yes even for Me
And promised to be there to set me free.

I listened to what this voice had to say
I wasn’t sure if I knew it was the right way
But so fed up of all that I’d done to myself
That I decided to put that fear on a shelf.

I opened my heart and let the Healer in
No sooner did I feel a new fire begin
Deep within a soul so torn and tattered
The paralytic nerve of pain was shattered.

Now I am free from all the demons inside
And in true happiness I can reside.
For I’ve learnt it is only through the Heavenly Father
Can we, our life’s fruits, begin to gather.

By : Nicole Rahaman
06.10.04
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Revelation

Contributed by Nicole_Rahaman on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I often cried myself to sleep
When into my soul I took a peep
Ashamed of the person I let myself be
Anger and hurt seemed to paralyze me

I’ve sometimes wondered why God lets me live
What to this world can I possibly give?
Why is there life in a lifeless being?
From whom all Angels of Good are fleeing?

I’ve recently heard a Voice so pure
Deep within me, It’s God’s I’m sure
He told me of His Love, Yes even for Me
And promised to be there to set me free.

I listened to what this voice had to say
I wasn’t sure if I knew it was the right way
But so fed up of all that I’d done to myself
That I decided to put that fear on a shelf.

I opened my heart and let the Healer in
No sooner did I feel a new fire begin
Deep within a soul so torn and tattered
The paralytic nerve of pain was shattered.

Now I am free from all the demons inside
And in true happiness I can reside.
For I’ve learnt it is only through the Heavenly Father
Can we, our life’s fruits, begin to gather.

By : Nicole Rahaman
06.10.04

Copyright Â© Nicole_Rahaman ... [ 2004-10-07 09:48:46]
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Re: Revelation (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:47:57 PM AEST
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"I’ve sometimes wondered why God lets me live
What to this world can I possibly give?
Why is there life in a lifeless being?
From whom all Angels of Good are fleeing?"

You know the purpose for which you are here... and don't ever lose sight of it....
Great write..as always...... Good to see you posting..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Revelation (User Rating: 1 )
by thewordzwithin on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:16:17 PM AEST
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You have a great amount of strength inside of you. You might be saying to yourself, "How in the world do you know that." Well I'm glad you asked. Your writing shows a strength in the knowledge of your purpose in life. You have gone through not, "bad situations" but you have gone through life. I'm only 19 and I know already that life is full of the trails and tribulations that make us doubt life itself. But your faith in God has helped you a great deal and your form of expression through poetry is a remarkable way of letting go. I thank you for the poem and I hope the post wasn't too long. If you ever feel as though something in your life has you down and you simply can't let it go, I give to you this phrase I tell myself, "If letting go was so easy, we wouldn't feel so liberated when we do." Keep up the good work and God Bless!!!!!!!!!

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