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Array ( [sid] => 6640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Drawing lines [time] => 2002-11-13 23:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => short of breath
fire in the sky
nod of head
so death can die
killing time
shoot off your mouth
the judging of me
like you know what im about

break of day
sip wine
see it as yours
but now mine
fight through
charge in
make believe
pretend

Its just what you do
so hollow I can see through
short tempered with a violent taste
bent out of shape cause you can relate
its understood that you should quiet wasting my time

under your breath
say it now
look at me
dont ask how
cover up
lose your mind
roll your eyes
try to rewind

I see right through you
I see right through you

draw lines
strip smile
eat the dirt
walk the mile
helping hand
to see what to find
what is yours
is now mine

Its just what you do
so hollow I can see through
short tempered with a violent taste
bent out of shape cause you can relate
its understood that you should quiet wasting my time
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => rawjer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Drawing lines

Contributed by rawjer on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

short of breath
fire in the sky
nod of head
so death can die
killing time
shoot off your mouth
the judging of me
like you know what im about

break of day
sip wine
see it as yours
but now mine
fight through
charge in
make believe
pretend

Its just what you do
so hollow I can see through
short tempered with a violent taste
bent out of shape cause you can relate
its understood that you should quiet wasting my time

under your breath
say it now
look at me
dont ask how
cover up
lose your mind
roll your eyes
try to rewind

I see right through you
I see right through you

draw lines
strip smile
eat the dirt
walk the mile
helping hand
to see what to find
what is yours
is now mine

Its just what you do
so hollow I can see through
short tempered with a violent taste
bent out of shape cause you can relate
its understood that you should quiet wasting my time

Copyright Â© rawjer ... [ 2002-11-13 23:00:00]
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Re: Drawing lines (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:05:25 AM AEST
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nice write.

Re: Drawing lines (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:11:01 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one alot
Thanks for sharing it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Drawing lines (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:37:19 PM AEST
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oh wow...very, very good...i love it...

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