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Array ( [sid] => 66377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Are Not The One [time] => 2004-10-06 18:54:46 [hometext] => What will u feel when u find that the one u loved is not the one?! [bodytext] => You did what no other girl on earth could do
You broke my heart even though my heart was true
Because of you I was about to lose my mind
But now it’s time to leave all the past behind
I thought I’ll never stop until you are mine
But I found that all the time I spent in loving you was just a waste of time
I thought I won’t be able to live without you if you are gone
I hope I was wrong, because if I’m not, then how am I supposed to carry on
We could have been so good together
We could have made this last forever
I know it might take a life time to forget you
But I’m sure that somehow I’ll be able to
It’s time for me to start from zero once again
And I pray to God that the memory will not remain
I pretend that everything is great, but the truth I’m burning from inside
I’m burning because I won’t see you by my side
All I’m trying to do is not feeling pain
But till now all my efforts are gone in vain
You didn’t appreciate all the things I’ve done
This means one thing and one thing only, that you are not the one

Yousef Hani

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You Are Not The One

Contributed by Yousef on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You did what no other girl on earth could do
You broke my heart even though my heart was true
Because of you I was about to lose my mind
But now it’s time to leave all the past behind
I thought I’ll never stop until you are mine
But I found that all the time I spent in loving you was just a waste of time
I thought I won’t be able to live without you if you are gone
I hope I was wrong, because if I’m not, then how am I supposed to carry on
We could have been so good together
We could have made this last forever
I know it might take a life time to forget you
But I’m sure that somehow I’ll be able to
It’s time for me to start from zero once again
And I pray to God that the memory will not remain
I pretend that everything is great, but the truth I’m burning from inside
I’m burning because I won’t see you by my side
All I’m trying to do is not feeling pain
But till now all my efforts are gone in vain
You didn’t appreciate all the things I’ve done
This means one thing and one thing only, that you are not the one

Yousef Hani





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Re: You Are Not The One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:02:33 PM AEST
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sounds like my last relationship. an excellent write.


Re: You Are Not The One (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:28:48 PM AEST
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could it be that we all feel the same..pretending we feel one thing when we really feel something else? Great write. Kill me now..I'm so tired...go read my story Need..then you'll see how I really feel...


Re: You Are Not The One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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awesome write. its amazing cuz i swear i am going thru the exact same thing. i do hope things get better for you. (and me). so far, ive loved all your poems that ive read. keep writing. you have talent. jenny


Re: You Are Not The One (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:58:00 PM AEST
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Thanks all for your comments, I really appreciate it.


Re: You Are Not The One (User Rating: 1 )
by Jarmen_Kell on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:18:42 AM AEST
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When that happens, what will you do? let go.

I believe that the surest sign that God loves us all is that we have been given free will and freedom of choice. This is the greatest gift one can ever give: freedom!




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