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Array ( [sid] => 66314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Serrated Whore [time] => 2004-10-06 10:35:44 [hometext] => I felt really bitter today, I needed an outlet.. [bodytext] => She waits there, pining for me silently
Like a secret, ashamed to be revealed
Again we unite, with familiar moroseness
Again we mesh, mere skin and blood yield

She floods my mind with darkly vivid pictures
I recognise emphatic feelings from times before
She knows me well, how I want to be touched
She releases me, with relief from my very core

Its over as soon as it began. Seems to be a trend
She lies by my side, silent and quietly content
While I lie with my back to her, tears welling up
Knowing fully this unsaid understanding is portent

What looked appealing before is now what I despise
What seemed an easy way out now seems a chore
What I have come to want is now all that I need
What I could not get enough of is all I want more

She is ruling my life with her swift metallic camber
She determines my fate with the trace of her score
She wears my pleasure with all its crimson delight
She is my ultimate decline. She is my serrated whore
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 13 [informant] => emphaticplacebo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My Serrated Whore

Contributed by emphaticplacebo on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:35:44 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



She waits there, pining for me silently
Like a secret, ashamed to be revealed
Again we unite, with familiar moroseness
Again we mesh, mere skin and blood yield

She floods my mind with darkly vivid pictures
I recognise emphatic feelings from times before
She knows me well, how I want to be touched
She releases me, with relief from my very core

Its over as soon as it began. Seems to be a trend
She lies by my side, silent and quietly content
While I lie with my back to her, tears welling up
Knowing fully this unsaid understanding is portent

What looked appealing before is now what I despise
What seemed an easy way out now seems a chore
What I have come to want is now all that I need
What I could not get enough of is all I want more

She is ruling my life with her swift metallic camber
She determines my fate with the trace of her score
She wears my pleasure with all its crimson delight
She is my ultimate decline. She is my serrated whore




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Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:38:49 AM AEST
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Very very intense, and well worded... You did a good job.


Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:47:38 AM AEST
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wow, a very wel expressed write on selfharm, I liked the way you put this together,

takecare,

pixie xx


Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:52:47 PM AEST
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You weave words of such intense emotion, of such sheer perfection... A slap-in-the-face type of poem. You have alot of talent! This captivated me till the very end, and yet, a sadness enveloped me, for an end to a poem such as this, is an end to all things.. I truly love this! I can really relate. Thank you for sharing this with us. Feel better. All my love!

~*Fleur de Sang*~


Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:22:00 AM AEST
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How sad! That was such a good poem...OMG! Sometimes it's hard to find a great poem to read...and when I find one I get all excited...I'm glad I read yours. Keep writing...you'll only get better.
Krystle


Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by DamentedSuicide on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:14:06 AM AEST
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great write =)


Re: My Serrated Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Mekare on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:29:49 PM AEST
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I loved this piece. It was well worded and flowed beautifully. Great job!




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