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Array ( [sid] => 66306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS! [time] => 2004-10-06 09:16:57 [hometext] => IT TOOK A MINUTE TO WRITE THIS ONE THIS MORNING,PLEASE COMMENT ON THE STORY LINE [bodytext] => Blood bubles in a vat of wax,
the mad butcher sits waiting,cleaning his axe,
hanging new meat in his gruesome shop,
he smiles frantically and begins to chop,
this cut prime for his friend,
the slasher witch that lives near the end,ofthis street,
she gathers up victims he ,dices the treat,
slathered in hatred in this filthy hell,
the smell of a coarpse,
rotting to tell,
a story of macarbe,
a twisted spell,
of their true delight,
the terrible two wait for you in the night,
for your car to break down in this desolate town,
where you can not be found,by man nor hound,

souls do linger here,smothering cries of damnations fears,
the slasher cradles the tears in a vile,
that she uses for hexes once in a while,
she screached so loud,for they are proud,
of the evil shrowd. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 18 [informant] => blackholesun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Holiday Poetry )

part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS!

Contributed by blackholesun on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:16:57 AM in AEST
Topic: Holiday Poetry

Blood bubles in a vat of wax,
the mad butcher sits waiting,cleaning his axe,
hanging new meat in his gruesome shop,
he smiles frantically and begins to chop,
this cut prime for his friend,
the slasher witch that lives near the end,ofthis street,
she gathers up victims he ,dices the treat,
slathered in hatred in this filthy hell,
the smell of a coarpse,
rotting to tell,
a story of macarbe,
a twisted spell,
of their true delight,
the terrible two wait for you in the night,
for your car to break down in this desolate town,
where you can not be found,by man nor hound,

souls do linger here,smothering cries of damnations fears,
the slasher cradles the tears in a vile,
that she uses for hexes once in a while,
she screached so loud,for they are proud,
of the evil shrowd.

Copyright © blackholesun ... [ 2004-10-06 09:16:57]
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Re: part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:27:45 AM AEST
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Cool write, nice and graphic with a touch of gore, though would've thought you would post this under the dark catorgory? not holiday.
Heh but I still loved the wording, and the way the words played through to the conclusion, really cool.

Re: part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS! (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:16:04 AM AEST
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i love it, no rap beat this time lol more like cathedral organ, cross between phantom of the opera and thriller, nice writting, verry vivid, keep up the good work . . .

Dorian : )

Re: part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:23:20 AM AEST
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i enjoyed your second installment lol, very good,

pixie xx

Re: part 2 of 13 HALLOWEEN HORRORS! (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:46:41 PM AEST
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Cool Stuff, Blackie!

The cadence of your words
is just awesome.
Loved the images.
Loved the lyrical rhymes.
I hope this goes well
for you. This should be
a classic.

--Mothy

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