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Array ( [sid] => 66246 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Mistake... [time] => 2004-10-05 19:04:25 [hometext] => Is there is a point in loving someone that doesn't love you?! [bodytext] => At last I realized that my love to her was a mistake
Even though all the feelings that I had for her wasn't fake
She broke my heart even though my love to her was real
And it will take time but I am sure that one day it will heal
After I lost her I started to lose my brain
As if I was dying slowly with a lot of pain
Everything to me was the same
And I didn't know who should I blame?
I felt as if everything I did or said was wrong
I felt as if I just wrote my worst and awful song
I was asking myself why I fell in love with her
From the beginning why didn't I take care?
I keep convincing myself that it wasn't meant to be
Maybe I don't deserve her and maybe she doesn't deserve me
Even though it was a mistake, but my love to her is something I don't regret
Even though it was a mistake, it is the one thing that I just can't forget
I kept wondering is there is a point in loving someone that doesn't love you
Is there is a point in going through what I went through
After all this I really have nothing left to say
But to hope I'll find the one I'm looking for one day
I was ready to do anything for her sake
But now, I realized that my love to her was a mistake


Yousef Hani







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A Mistake...

Contributed by Yousef on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:04:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



At last I realized that my love to her was a mistake
Even though all the feelings that I had for her wasn't fake
She broke my heart even though my love to her was real
And it will take time but I am sure that one day it will heal
After I lost her I started to lose my brain
As if I was dying slowly with a lot of pain
Everything to me was the same
And I didn't know who should I blame?
I felt as if everything I did or said was wrong
I felt as if I just wrote my worst and awful song
I was asking myself why I fell in love with her
From the beginning why didn't I take care?
I keep convincing myself that it wasn't meant to be
Maybe I don't deserve her and maybe she doesn't deserve me
Even though it was a mistake, but my love to her is something I don't regret
Even though it was a mistake, it is the one thing that I just can't forget
I kept wondering is there is a point in loving someone that doesn't love you
Is there is a point in going through what I went through
After all this I really have nothing left to say
But to hope I'll find the one I'm looking for one day
I was ready to do anything for her sake
But now, I realized that my love to her was a mistake


Yousef Hani











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Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:20:16 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so well.

good job


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:50:09 PM AEST
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Great Poem Yousef......it can be heartbreaking for sure. But it's better to love and lose than never to have loved at all!
This is an excellent poem........Good job Yousef, I enjoyed reading it.
Lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:20:55 PM AEST
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Great write. But I don't think any love is ever wasted. I know it's easier said then done, but take it as a learning experiance and move on. Good luck!
Katie


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:22:48 PM AEST
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some things are worth waiting for. and some things are best left alone. its a judgement call that only you can make with times passing.


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 01:38:14 AM AEST
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I feel your pain. Your love for her was probably useful in that it taught you some life lessons. It sucks to realize someone doesn't feel the same as you do for them. Nice write - keep up the good work.

-Laurel


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:49:48 AM AEST
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this is so sad, I am sorry that you got your heart broken, a well expressed write,

pixie xx


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
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Been there.

Your honesty always
makes for good poems.
--Mothy


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:46:45 PM AEST
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Thanks all for your comments, I really appreciate it.


Re: A Mistake... (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:45:07 PM AEST
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WoW Yousef this is really good, you dont need me to tell you that... You have great talent

Ma salam
Ramadan Ymbarak




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