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Array ( [sid] => 66243 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLEEDING TEARS [time] => 2004-10-05 18:43:28 [hometext] => When popele used to ask me why i cut myself, i didn't really know what to say... This poem pretty much describes what i mean by bleeding tears and how it all goes about...I'm not really finished with it i'm stuck on the ending and stuff... [bodytext] => An undescribable urge
a terrible desire
to make a cut
that burns like fire.
It's a sickening sensation
to slice my flesh with a blade
and watch my blood drip
and the pain starts to fade.
The sharp tip of the razor
tears thru my skin
and the blood that drips down
is all the tears i hold in.
And as i bleed away the acid tears
that were buring thru my eyes
i can finally unclench my teeth
that were fighting back my cries.
For that moment i stop choking
on all the words i need to say
a few minutes without the hurt
that haunts me everyday...........

I'm still working on it i'm not sure exactly how i want to end it......

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Se1f-Destruct [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

BLEEDING TEARS

Contributed by Se1f-Destruct on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

An undescribable urge
a terrible desire
to make a cut
that burns like fire.
It's a sickening sensation
to slice my flesh with a blade
and watch my blood drip
and the pain starts to fade.
The sharp tip of the razor
tears thru my skin
and the blood that drips down
is all the tears i hold in.
And as i bleed away the acid tears
that were buring thru my eyes
i can finally unclench my teeth
that were fighting back my cries.
For that moment i stop choking
on all the words i need to say
a few minutes without the hurt
that haunts me everyday...........

I'm still working on it i'm not sure exactly how i want to end it......

Copyright © Se1f-Destruct ... [ 2004-10-05 18:43:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BLEEDING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by foxxylady852 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:54:10 PM AEST
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Your poetry was moving. I know the feeling. Its not healthy, but its like anything else...so tempting. Great write.

Re: BLEEDING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:02:44 PM AEST
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I love it! Im a cutter too and youve voiced how I feel very well!! great write, keep up the good work.

Re: BLEEDING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:45:13 PM AEST
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it will get to the point where you have to go farther to escape, and your life will be the debt to be paid, because it wasnt solved in the end.

Re: BLEEDING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:00:59 AM AEST
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i can relate.
it seems hope is reborn when we cut doesnt it?
for me its a message to my parents. but they cannot see.
excellent write. i cannot express how i feel about it. keep writing is all i have to say.
av

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