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Array ( [sid] => 66234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My broken heart [time] => 2004-10-05 16:44:32 [hometext] => just another poem off the top of my head.... this ones not as good as my last poem [bodytext] => my broken heart crys for you
but you don't hear
and then i see you w/ her
and you're so happy
it's hard seeing you so happy
when i'm so sad
b/c once you were happy w/ me
but now everythings changed
you have her
and i have no one
no one to dry my tears
or hold me when i'm scared
or let me know they love me
you said you always would
but what a like that was
you're not here now
and never will be again
you're gone
and i'm still here
loving you as much as always
trying to stop
but not being able to
the feelings i have are to strong
the love i have for you won't go away
but my heart will stay broken
b/c you no longer love me
like you said you always would [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My broken heart

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

my broken heart crys for you
but you don't hear
and then i see you w/ her
and you're so happy
it's hard seeing you so happy
when i'm so sad
b/c once you were happy w/ me
but now everythings changed
you have her
and i have no one
no one to dry my tears
or hold me when i'm scared
or let me know they love me
you said you always would
but what a like that was
you're not here now
and never will be again
you're gone
and i'm still here
loving you as much as always
trying to stop
but not being able to
the feelings i have are to strong
the love i have for you won't go away
but my heart will stay broken
b/c you no longer love me
like you said you always would

Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-10-05 16:44:32]
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Re: My broken heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:53:34 PM AEST
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great write. sometimes thoughts are worse than reality in all actuality. what i mean by that statement is that this time you assumed about him loving you forever, and now its hurting you because you assumed wrongly. now you assume hes always going to be with her and not ever with you again. that is also hurting you. you might assume rightly, or wrongly, but just take it day by day, some things change, and some things never do.

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