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Array ( [sid] => 66228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to be your shewhore. [time] => 2004-10-05 16:07:30 [hometext] => yeah i know i have quite an imagination! [bodytext] => Thinking of you
Before me
Want you here
to explore me
Build me up
Take me down
Nasty things
Dirty minds
Explosions of lust
Burn into my mind
I want you
Will have you
Will take you
And make you
I will for you
I am yours
Completely
Get sweaty
be messy
Get vulgar
impure
and obscene.

Throw silence
to the wind
You make me
Scream out
Dirty words
love Me hard
and make me
Please ravage me
Disgusting
Perverted
So kinky
Please fill me
Seduce me
Oh please won't
You hurt me
Convert me
to hating
Just make me
Your slave
Please.

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 362 [topic] => 40 [informant] => sweettalkingwoman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 41 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

I want to be your shewhore.

Contributed by sweettalkingwoman on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:07:30 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Thinking of you
Before me
Want you here
to explore me
Build me up
Take me down
Nasty things
Dirty minds
Explosions of lust
Burn into my mind
I want you
Will have you
Will take you
And make you
I will for you
I am yours
Completely
Get sweaty
be messy
Get vulgar
impure
and obscene.

Throw silence
to the wind
You make me
Scream out
Dirty words
love Me hard
and make me
Please ravage me
Disgusting
Perverted
So kinky
Please fill me
Seduce me
Oh please won't
You hurt me
Convert me
to hating
Just make me
Your slave
Please.

Copyright © sweettalkingwoman ... [ 2004-10-05 16:07:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:13:44 PM AEST
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Wow sweettalkingwoman you should change your name to filthytalkingwoman this is HOT!!! Filthy and dirty...I loved it...you are incredibly gifted and well word this write

excellent first post, although Im sure some will be offended..Im not as Im a dirt bag

TY for sharing....more please

Kelly x

Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:56:01 AM AEST
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It seems more erotic than kinky. I found it leaped into an assumption of perversion too directly, with 'convert me to hating', and left me slightly cooler than I wished to be having finished a poem with such a title. Also, the 'please' at the end contradicts

"Will have you
Will take you"

I'm unsure of the Sub/Dom element here . . . fascinating though it is - it confuses me slightly, although the passionate words are prevalent and certainly image-inducive. But what do I know? lol.

Keep writing.

Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:34:12 AM AEST
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Lol flip is right we should call you filthytalkingwoman.
Oh by the way good write even though alittle on the x rated side.

Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:39:30 AM AEST
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wow *fans herself* wonderful write, I love your style, good job my blokes coming round soon, your poem has reall got me in the mood for some hanky panky lol

pixie xx

Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:46:47 PM AEST
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lol this is like a porno in words...great, seductive write

Mason

Re: I want to be your shewhore. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:51:48 PM AEST
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what a great poem! You're an amazing poet! I have got to read more of your work!!!

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