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Array ( [sid] => 66145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Doorway [time] => 2004-10-05 00:46:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Stepped back in the doorway
Began to breathe for the first time
Inhale and exhale all the feelings
The same emotions I once held as mine

Wander through the tall grass
Leave the door alone to stand
Staring blank and wide open
Walk away from yesterday, still glowing grand

Step into the livewire
Feel the energy from the bottom and between
Run away from the tall grass
Return from that crazy, foolish dream

Climb with me so much higher
See over all that deep, tall grass
Start over with forever
Let that time slip away and pass

Promise that you'll find me
Always etched into rust colored stone
Initials on a tree crest
Staring blankly into eternity, standing all alone

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Doorway

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:46:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Stepped back in the doorway
Began to breathe for the first time
Inhale and exhale all the feelings
The same emotions I once held as mine

Wander through the tall grass
Leave the door alone to stand
Staring blank and wide open
Walk away from yesterday, still glowing grand

Step into the livewire
Feel the energy from the bottom and between
Run away from the tall grass
Return from that crazy, foolish dream

Climb with me so much higher
See over all that deep, tall grass
Start over with forever
Let that time slip away and pass

Promise that you'll find me
Always etched into rust colored stone
Initials on a tree crest
Staring blankly into eternity, standing all alone

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-10-05 00:46:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Doorway (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:24:21 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, painting such a vivid picture with clear images.

Re: Doorway (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:40:36 PM AEST
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I totally agree with Kinderblood. Awesome write.
Katie

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