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Array ( [sid] => 66121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title yet [time] => 2004-10-04 20:30:29 [hometext] => no comment. [bodytext] => Feelings rage inside
thoughts of commiting suicide.
In the closet you grab the gun
and hold it to your head.
Your so sick of this life
you think your better off dead.
You start to think of the good life
that you had.
Thinking of where it went wrong
and why your feeling sad.
You pull the trigger
but nothing comes out
so then you try to reload
but then you start to change your mind
as good memorys unfold.
Everything from laughing and joking
around with your friends and just having fun
tears start to flood your eyes
then you drop the gun. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => miss_erika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

no title yet

Contributed by miss_erika on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:30:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Feelings rage inside
thoughts of commiting suicide.
In the closet you grab the gun
and hold it to your head.
Your so sick of this life
you think your better off dead.
You start to think of the good life
that you had.
Thinking of where it went wrong
and why your feeling sad.
You pull the trigger
but nothing comes out
so then you try to reload
but then you start to change your mind
as good memorys unfold.
Everything from laughing and joking
around with your friends and just having fun
tears start to flood your eyes
then you drop the gun.

Copyright © miss_erika ... [ 2004-10-04 20:30:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:13:50 PM AEST
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=]] excellent write. i always like the inspirational writes that have to do with this.

Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:34:37 PM AEST
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wow amazin ..i loved your peom great work

Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:20:34 PM AEST
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like wow! its amazing that you wrote this. i have felt exactly this way before. it kind of left me speechless. and tears came to my eyes because i know how that feels. i have been there. in that exact place. Great write! peace n love. God bless. jenny

Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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that was a good story told in that poem... awesome job reminding us that there are good times mixed in with all these rotten ones.

keep it up hun

Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:16:11 AM AEST
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Awesome poem. Great message of hope.

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