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Array ( [sid] => 66119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come With me [time] => 2004-10-04 20:20:58 [hometext] => I dont like this poem at all but its the first one in like a month that i wrote. so i dont blame u if u think it sux. [bodytext] => Come with me little girl
come with me for a walk
hurry now lets go
theres no more time to talk.
Push through all these people
as I grab you by the arm.
Come on now dont be shy
I promise you no harm.
Come with me down there
down into the creek
close your eyes really tight
dont you dare to peek.
Just keep really quiet
this shouldn't really hurt.
just keep your eyes shut
as i unzip your pants
and take off your shirt.
Those tears are heavely falling
from the little girls eyes.
But he doesn't care
and keeps going as she cries.
Ok now little girl
Im going to tie this rope around your neck
it will make short of breath
but just think of it as only
a simple way of death. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 32 [informant] => miss_erika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Come With me

Contributed by miss_erika on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:20:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Come with me little girl
come with me for a walk
hurry now lets go
theres no more time to talk.
Push through all these people
as I grab you by the arm.
Come on now dont be shy
I promise you no harm.
Come with me down there
down into the creek
close your eyes really tight
dont you dare to peek.
Just keep really quiet
this shouldn't really hurt.
just keep your eyes shut
as i unzip your pants
and take off your shirt.
Those tears are heavely falling
from the little girls eyes.
But he doesn't care
and keeps going as she cries.
Ok now little girl
Im going to tie this rope around your neck
it will make short of breath
but just think of it as only
a simple way of death.

Copyright © miss_erika ... [ 2004-10-04 20:20:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Come With me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:17:58 PM AEST
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i must say this one was surpising as was your other one. woe to those who assume anything... you wrote this one very well, and it has an emotional outpour to it. i think this one is worth liking =]

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