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Array ( [sid] => 6607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Angel Of Peace [time] => 2002-11-13 06:30:00 [hometext] => If only this would happen for real.

The Phantom [bodytext] => Darkness is about to set, war still a deadly treat,
My brothers in arms lie dead, at my feet runs a river of red,
A gun shot disrupts the slience, and relights the fuse of volience,
I open fire, in hopes I hit the target desired,

Keep my head down, as bombs brust all around,
The night air is so cold, as bodies lay riddled with holes,
I'm just another soldier left for dead, throughout my body the pain spreads,
I lay motionless in a puddle of blood, as another soldier makes a hollow thud,

I await my fate, as I'm consumed by hate,
I wonder if it's time to die, then I hear a little girl cry,
She is blood of my enemy, was she sent to finish me,
She rushes to my side, placeing her hands upon my wounded thigh,

She speaks of her dad, how his life was cut short by this war we've had,
She leaves my side, steps upon the battlefield where so many have died,
The bullets cease, fore she is the angel of peace,
The battle stops, as our weapons drop,

The darkness leaves, the sunlight is freed,
She starts to cry, and asks us why,
Why must you fight, haven't we taken enough life,
Then shes gone, and now we live with what we've done wrong.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 8 [counter] => 554 [topic] => 28 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Patriotic )
Angel Of Peace

Contributed by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Patriotic



Darkness is about to set, war still a deadly treat,
My brothers in arms lie dead, at my feet runs a river of red,
A gun shot disrupts the slience, and relights the fuse of volience,
I open fire, in hopes I hit the target desired,

Keep my head down, as bombs brust all around,
The night air is so cold, as bodies lay riddled with holes,
I'm just another soldier left for dead, throughout my body the pain spreads,
I lay motionless in a puddle of blood, as another soldier makes a hollow thud,

I await my fate, as I'm consumed by hate,
I wonder if it's time to die, then I hear a little girl cry,
She is blood of my enemy, was she sent to finish me,
She rushes to my side, placeing her hands upon my wounded thigh,

She speaks of her dad, how his life was cut short by this war we've had,
She leaves my side, steps upon the battlefield where so many have died,
The bullets cease, fore she is the angel of peace,
The battle stops, as our weapons drop,

The darkness leaves, the sunlight is freed,
She starts to cry, and asks us why,
Why must you fight, haven't we taken enough life,
Then shes gone, and now we live with what we've done wrong.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2002-11-13 06:30:00]
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Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:32:33 AM AEST
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this was a real touching poem,so many times this happens in the world,even now,
We need that angel of peace all the time! Great write! hristina


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:49:10 AM AEST
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Another great write, Phantom..you're getting better and better all the time...
Jenni


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessica_Saini on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:57:01 AM AEST
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this is a great poem. I just had to read it twice.


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:59:40 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem, it
brought tears to my eyes, it's so
sad and full of so many painful
things. I really enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming i enjoy reading
your poetry.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:55:05 AM AEST
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Great poem ... thoughtprovoking and sad. Well written


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by lisalisacool on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 12:46:20 PM AEST
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WOW!

Sorry but this poem made me speechless and is all that I can say!

You really covered the tragedy of war, but respected the emotion side thought too.

again WOW


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:52:44 PM AEST
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Thank you all for taking the time to read my poetry, I'm glad you enjoy it. I never thought my poems could provoke such emotions. Thanks again.

The Phantom


Re: Angel Of Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:08:14 AM AEST
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This is another beautiful testimony of your wonderful talent Babe keep it up and you will soon have enough on here to make your own book.




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