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Array ( [sid] => 66068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => VANITY part 2 [time] => 2004-10-04 09:07:58 [hometext] => i figured i would write this for the sake of my own self arguements,now we can see both sides of the mirror! [bodytext] => looking at me ,why cant i see,
how ugly i can be,
the circles under my eyes,
are no suprise,my tears are my demise,
pale white skin,makes me look sick,
like someone pelted me upside the head with a brick!
my hair all frizzy and nappy,
my whole look is crappy,
my face is broken out ,i just want to shout!
i hate the way i look i never want to go out!
im so tired of looking in the mirror and seeing me,
but there is no one else i would rather be,
i might not be pretty,
i might not look smart,
but one think i do have that sets us apart,
my art,
i might look rough,but what beauty is in my mind!
in everything is something pretty,with me its just hard to find. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 39 [informant] => blackholesun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

VANITY part 2

Contributed by blackholesun on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:07:58 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

looking at me ,why cant i see,
how ugly i can be,
the circles under my eyes,
are no suprise,my tears are my demise,
pale white skin,makes me look sick,
like someone pelted me upside the head with a brick!
my hair all frizzy and nappy,
my whole look is crappy,
my face is broken out ,i just want to shout!
i hate the way i look i never want to go out!
im so tired of looking in the mirror and seeing me,
but there is no one else i would rather be,
i might not be pretty,
i might not look smart,
but one think i do have that sets us apart,
my art,
i might look rough,but what beauty is in my mind!
in everything is something pretty,with me its just hard to find.

Copyright © blackholesun ... [ 2004-10-04 09:07:58]
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Re: VANITY part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:17:26 AM AEST
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Your beauty shines from within, bathing your words, with the richness of your thoughtful mind. You only see what you wish to see, yet I see a beautiful personality, and I feel honored to have you as a friend.
Such beautiful words, yet with a hint of sadness, but yet they do hold some hope.
Awesome poem.

Take Care
Karl

Re: VANITY part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:10:03 PM AEST
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so true the beauty comes from within you just have to find it even though most of the time its really hard...good luck but i know you can find it!
great job "chick"

Summer

Re: VANITY part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:59:25 AM AEST
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very good write...good

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