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Array ( [sid] => 66050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shadowy Whispers [time] => 2004-10-04 05:11:34 [hometext] => Some dreams seem too real!! [bodytext] => Confined to a hollow space
where shadows laugh,
decieved by distance,
they dance
examining murky air,
I cannot see what preys
upon my moves,
requesting my mind
to wander,
only tarnished memories found
reverting back to present,
wishing it was past,
Whispers
the night is talking,
shredded promises carelessly thrown,
twisting with fear,
exhausted by adrenalin
Making its way; soft pale lights,
sustaining brilliant hopes of today,
I awoke.
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Shadowy Whispers

Contributed by shanarah on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:11:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Confined to a hollow space
where shadows laugh,
decieved by distance,
they dance
examining murky air,
I cannot see what preys
upon my moves,
requesting my mind
to wander,
only tarnished memories found
reverting back to present,
wishing it was past,
Whispers
the night is talking,
shredded promises carelessly thrown,
twisting with fear,
exhausted by adrenalin
Making its way; soft pale lights,
sustaining brilliant hopes of today,
I awoke.

Copyright © shanarah ... [ 2004-10-04 05:11:34]
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Re: Shadowy Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:46:46 AM AEST
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Wow, this was great!
Excellent depiction!

~Breezy

Re: Shadowy Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:29:17 AM AEST
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wow that was an amazing write, very good expression and description,

pixie xx

Re: Shadowy Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 03:03:06 PM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Shadowy Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:37:55 PM AEST
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Hopes and dreams are all that make life worth living. But sometimes those dreams can be unbearable. I find that on many days the best thing that happened was that I did wake.

Blessings,
Rita

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