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Array ( [sid] => 65993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely [time] => 2004-10-03 14:31:31 [hometext] => Life passing me by as I work 18 hours a day [bodytext] => I'm lonely.... I'm mister lonely, I have no one to call my own!
Words of a song that reflect my life,
I stumble and fall...words that tell of my strife.
I have found no heart on which to have my name,
too many years of hard work, long hours are they to blame?
Is it just a flawed character that rules my being?
or is it just my true heart they are not seeing?
Do I throw up my hands and walk away from all I've worked for these many years?
because is it worth the loneliness and tears?
Do I hide myself in the work to hide my fears?
I tell myself I'm building a future,
there is only one day between ... past, present, and future.
what I wouldn't give to be able to just go for a long walk and enjoy nature.
but what is the point with no hand to hold?
No heart to beat for me, no soft words, or soft touch.
Things that make a heart to glow and rush!
I'm tired, life has passed me by.
not a tear shed not even a sigh;
What will I leave to show I was here?
material gain? when it is gone who will care.
So that is why I'm lonely... yes mister lonely...
I have no one to call my own...
not even my beautiful little one...

By Andy [comments] => 6 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 21 [informant] => twisterchaser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Lonely

Contributed by twisterchaser on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:31:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'm lonely.... I'm mister lonely, I have no one to call my own!
Words of a song that reflect my life,
I stumble and fall...words that tell of my strife.
I have found no heart on which to have my name,
too many years of hard work, long hours are they to blame?
Is it just a flawed character that rules my being?
or is it just my true heart they are not seeing?
Do I throw up my hands and walk away from all I've worked for these many years?
because is it worth the loneliness and tears?
Do I hide myself in the work to hide my fears?
I tell myself I'm building a future,
there is only one day between ... past, present, and future.
what I wouldn't give to be able to just go for a long walk and enjoy nature.
but what is the point with no hand to hold?
No heart to beat for me, no soft words, or soft touch.
Things that make a heart to glow and rush!
I'm tired, life has passed me by.
not a tear shed not even a sigh;
What will I leave to show I was here?
material gain? when it is gone who will care.
So that is why I'm lonely... yes mister lonely...
I have no one to call my own...
not even my beautiful little one...

By Andy




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Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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This poem just made me want to hug you! I've been there you know... I hope things work out for you. Oh! And my favorite line was
"there is only one day between ... past, present, and future."
it's true


Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:36:02 PM AEST
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Ohh god this upset me..so beautifully conveyed are your feelings

Dont be sad.and lonely ..

Kelly x


Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:48:25 PM AEST
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yes I loved that line too(stated above) and I also felt so sad for you...all work and no one to play with hope things will turn around soon and
I hope you will find someone to keep you company
loved your write though
cheers!~ 5 stars


Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:27:14 PM AEST
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heartwrenching. other people do impact our lives greatly, but they arent necessities, they are just "luxuries"


Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:34:08 PM AEST
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awww.... andy, this one is so sad, cheer up buddy:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:18:13 AM AEST
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very sad, emotional poem.
rhyme was good, awesome depth.
great work. keep it up.
Arden




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