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A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Finding Out How,
Her Death Begins.

Bloody Tear Drops,
Falling Down.
Screaming Inside.
Her Mouth - No Sound.

Pleading Sorrows,
Drowning Soul.
Nothing Left,
To Make Her Whole.

Choking Tears,
Inside Her Throat.
Clutching Tight,
Her Suicide Note.

Living Nightmares,
Every Day.
Haunting Voices,
Have Their Say.

Weaving Ribbons,
Trail Down Her Skin.
Caused From The Pain,
She Feels Within.

A Shattered Soul,
A Shattered Heart.
Nothing Else Left,
To Tear Apart.

The Darkest Black,
Swallowed Me Whole.
And Tore Apart,
My Helpless Soul.

A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Listened To The Song,
The Devil Did Sing
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A shattered Angel, with shredded wings

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:37:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Finding Out How,
Her Death Begins.

Bloody Tear Drops,
Falling Down.
Screaming Inside.
Her Mouth - No Sound.

Pleading Sorrows,
Drowning Soul.
Nothing Left,
To Make Her Whole.

Choking Tears,
Inside Her Throat.
Clutching Tight,
Her Suicide Note.

Living Nightmares,
Every Day.
Haunting Voices,
Have Their Say.

Weaving Ribbons,
Trail Down Her Skin.
Caused From The Pain,
She Feels Within.

A Shattered Soul,
A Shattered Heart.
Nothing Else Left,
To Tear Apart.

The Darkest Black,
Swallowed Me Whole.
And Tore Apart,
My Helpless Soul.

A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Listened To The Song,
The Devil Did Sing

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-10-03 10:37:55]
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:17:38 AM AEST
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wow, just wow, I am so glad that you pulled through, well done to you *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by FatherTom on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:23:54 PM AEST
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Glad you pulled through. While the poem is quite dark it is well written. I say you put the whole ordeal as well as this poem behind you. Likely their are many more people that love you dearly than you might be aware of. Reach out them and let them help you.

Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:59:35 PM AEST
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great poem i loved it

Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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this was a great write.... i'm glad you decided not to do this.... and again... great write...

*hugs*
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~

Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:41:25 AM AEST
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wow

thats all i can say

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