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Array ( [sid] => 65912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember When [time] => 2004-10-02 19:12:33 [hometext] => Gosh do I hate when someone dies...especially when I loved them for so long...that different kind of love... [bodytext] => Remember when
I looked at you
it was then
you said you knew

Remember when
you held me tight
it was what you did
after I caused that fight

Remember when
I would always smile
it was then I said
I love you, and its only been a while

Remember when
I thought I did something wrong
but instead of getting mad
you laughed and wrote me a song

Remember when
you stole my heart
it was that, that kept
us from falling apart

Remember when
I sat by you in the hospital bed
you probably dont
because then you were dead
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Remember When

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Remember when
I looked at you
it was then
you said you knew

Remember when
you held me tight
it was what you did
after I caused that fight

Remember when
I would always smile
it was then I said
I love you, and its only been a while

Remember when
I thought I did something wrong
but instead of getting mad
you laughed and wrote me a song

Remember when
you stole my heart
it was that, that kept
us from falling apart

Remember when
I sat by you in the hospital bed
you probably dont
because then you were dead

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-10-02 19:12:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Remember When (User Rating: 1 )
by MaMort on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:50:43 PM AEST
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My god, that's really strong. I've never had any loved ones die so I don't know what it feels like. But I know how I would feel if they ever did. Great poem.

Re: Remember When (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:15:28 PM AEST
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very heartfelt words. strong and potent Im sorry for your loss. wishing you strength. powerful write with added sadness. A++++

Re: Remember When (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:52:12 PM AEST
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I don't like the ending...no no no!!!!!!!

Re: Remember When (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:19:58 PM AEST
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powerfully written......................... hugs n' love nessa

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