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Array ( [sid] => 65897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Abstract Desire [time] => 2004-10-02 14:40:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This abstract desire is as obscene
As my legs wrapped around your back
Our fervor unleashed through the veins
Under our skin as thin as leaves
When we're vulnerable primal animals
And raw as their slaughtered meat
Only the bloodhounds could sniff this out
& I want to sex the life from
The stem which impales my womb
& keeps the liquid from flowing
To your sweating bud
Making you dizzy you know
It can never be hard enough for me
I like being stabbed and murdered
To pure delight & ecstacy thriving
Under & over you because I can never keep still
I'll catch every last drop in my mouth
My pretty little face of vulgarity
Waiting to be nourished because I feed
On the life of you and that which you can create with
I love the taste of your release [comments] => 5 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 2 [informant] => RhythmBndt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Abstract Desire

Contributed by RhythmBndt on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This abstract desire is as obscene
As my legs wrapped around your back
Our fervor unleashed through the veins
Under our skin as thin as leaves
When we're vulnerable primal animals
And raw as their slaughtered meat
Only the bloodhounds could sniff this out
& I want to sex the life from
The stem which impales my womb
& keeps the liquid from flowing
To your sweating bud
Making you dizzy you know
It can never be hard enough for me
I like being stabbed and murdered
To pure delight & ecstacy thriving
Under & over you because I can never keep still
I'll catch every last drop in my mouth
My pretty little face of vulgarity
Waiting to be nourished because I feed
On the life of you and that which you can create with
I love the taste of your release

Copyright © RhythmBndt ... [ 2004-10-02 14:40:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Abstract Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:01:08 PM AEST
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steamy!! well written and provocative.

Re: Abstract Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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I like this kinda stuff!

Homina, homina, homina...

--Mothy

Re: Abstract Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:56:52 PM AEST
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This poem is stirring but not bad.

Re: Abstract Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:36:41 PM AEST
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yeow.......wild, sexy and one I wont soon forget.
Well done
Larry

Re: Abstract Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:07:01 PM AEST
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Oh,how did I miss this flow?
EXCELLENT BEAUTIFUL TANTALISING AND
SEXY.

The Wind....

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