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Array ( [sid] => 65883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If that person was you [time] => 2004-10-02 13:24:33 [hometext] => Meh justa randome love poem, hope u all like! [bodytext] => Where do I turn from here, where else is there to go?
Im just debating this fear, and I thought you should know,
I need some help to decide, which way should I turn?
Wanting to run and hide, but I guess I'll need to learn,
I can't go on like this forever, it's tearing my soul apart,
I dont think it can get better, this shattered, broken heart,
Been let down way to much, lied to and used to many times,
The ravenouss poisoned touch, by evil and useless slime,
Thought that I could trust you, maybe you would care,
But you proved just as un true, as absent as the air,
Never caring about my feelings, just about your own,
And now there is no healing, to what you have done,
Did you make me stronger, and smarter than the rest?
The pain lasts much longer, so I must sadly confess,
Is there anyone in the world, who will love and really care,
To pick up a shattered girl, and where are they out there?
It really seems impossible, to believe that it is true,
I would be forever greatful, if that person was you.
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If that person was you

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Where do I turn from here, where else is there to go?
Im just debating this fear, and I thought you should know,
I need some help to decide, which way should I turn?
Wanting to run and hide, but I guess I'll need to learn,
I can't go on like this forever, it's tearing my soul apart,
I dont think it can get better, this shattered, broken heart,
Been let down way to much, lied to and used to many times,
The ravenouss poisoned touch, by evil and useless slime,
Thought that I could trust you, maybe you would care,
But you proved just as un true, as absent as the air,
Never caring about my feelings, just about your own,
And now there is no healing, to what you have done,
Did you make me stronger, and smarter than the rest?
The pain lasts much longer, so I must sadly confess,
Is there anyone in the world, who will love and really care,
To pick up a shattered girl, and where are they out there?
It really seems impossible, to believe that it is true,
I would be forever greatful, if that person was you.




Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-10-02 13:24:33]
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Re: If that person was you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:00:13 PM AEST
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awww a sweet sad and soft write,

pixie xx


Re: If that person was you (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:44:16 PM AEST
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really nice write.




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