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Array ( [sid] => 65863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Allow Me To Dream [time] => 2004-10-02 10:38:08 [hometext] => *** Sometimes the dream.... can be so very, very overwhelming (sigh) **** [bodytext] => You were there at sunrise
(almost)
Real enough to touch
Through the cluttered mind
Of early morning
I dreamt you, dreamt much

It was ever after always
(nearly)
Whispered in the dawn
A dreamer’s hopeful wish
For tomorrow
Not foolish, not wrong

It existed as perfection
(maybe)
To you I belonged
With sleep turning gently
To reality
I held you, held on

But slumber ran away
(truly)
Taking you along
The teardrops came with
The daylight
You were absent, gone

Alone without you
(still)
Longing for night
Wanting only to return
To the dream
Where we as one, unite

I will find you there
(always)
At the day’s end
When sundown brings yet
Another chance
To have you, once again
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Silent-No-More [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 38 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Allow Me To Dream

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:38:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You were there at sunrise
(almost)
Real enough to touch
Through the cluttered mind
Of early morning
I dreamt you, dreamt much

It was ever after always
(nearly)
Whispered in the dawn
A dreamer’s hopeful wish
For tomorrow
Not foolish, not wrong

It existed as perfection
(maybe)
To you I belonged
With sleep turning gently
To reality
I held you, held on

But slumber ran away
(truly)
Taking you along
The teardrops came with
The daylight
You were absent, gone

Alone without you
(still)
Longing for night
Wanting only to return
To the dream
Where we as one, unite

I will find you there
(always)
At the day’s end
When sundown brings yet
Another chance
To have you, once again

Copyright Â© Silent-No-More ... [ 2004-10-02 10:38:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:53:37 AM AEST
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You are so very creative!
The insertion of the single words is a very nice touch. The overall longing in the poem reaches out to me, touches me.
Keep dreaming,
Last nights dreams can be tomorrows delight.
I am never disapointed by your writes, thank you.

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:56:40 AM AEST
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SNM, hon, I'm shocked, stunned, awed, impressed, and touched . . . this is so beautiful, so perfect, so very you. It must have been hard to write this, but it came out wonderfully. Keep writing, hon.

hugs,
Nora

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:17:51 AM AEST
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I love this write...a dream lover who seems so real, or a lover who we can never have.

So beautiful and so very well written
Many Roses
Larry

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:41:06 AM AEST
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wow, a moving poem with so much effort put into it, a very great piece of work by you SNM,

*HUGS*

pixie xx

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:47:14 AM AEST
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I love the sentiment in this poem and I really like the style you chose.
Those one word second lines are so poignant. Absolute perfection.

~Breezy

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:32:02 AM AEST
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Wonderful, wonderful poem. Theres nothing better on a Sunday morning than to read such beautiful words about ones dreaming desires of passion. Thanks...............Mike

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:19:16 PM AEST
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Awesome dream. Great writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Dream on.

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:20:45 PM AEST
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Oh wow. I'm truly amazed at this write,it's incredible,on of the bests I've read in a long time...
PumpkinPie

Re: Allow Me To Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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And yet, another lovely love poem from Snemmers. :-)

*sighs*

Beautiful and touching.

Timbo

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